© RH Peat 5/27/2011 11:07am
Form: 3 tercets/ 9 lines
Metaphor: Love: where we place our
desire our experience follows.
Ekphasis: From Painting
“Dive into the ocean of mind!”
© Nalini (Adhishray), USA
http://www.paintingsilove.com/image/show/221810/dive-into-the-ocean-of-mind

Tides Of Consciousness

Tides Of Consciousness

She is forever pink in my mind
where my longing flows in a current
that’s held in fingertip discovery.

I am a blue ghost on that coastline
that goes on forever inside my head
where dreams escape the horizon.

Those lips pressed to my cheek
are eternal in their touched presence
that awakens my passionate eye.


© RH Peat 5/27/2011

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Gold crested...diamond filled...a gem for somone's treasured heart. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Munia Khan
I am floating with these tides Of Consciousness Ron!! What are you anyway Ron?? More than a poet indeed blessed with so many creative brain cells..Superb work..

 

Frank Lambert
Damn, I didn't expect to find one as beautiful as this written by you Ron (sorry if that sounds...). But damn, this is genuinely beautiful.

narain, jay p.
nice poem