What lies ahead.....
Darkness descends
into the unseen gaps
Rounded by the winds....
Thankfully this oblivion
is only a daylong affair.
As the sunshine steps into
the world of shadows
A sunk path emerges
around the dark woods
Whose wait has only begun...
Glistening shores shall be
mortgaged again as stars
feast on a day's gold.
The marshes shall become
an epitaph of a moment again.
Footsteps shall adorn
the mighty heads of dunes
as a feather in the karmic cap...
Winds shall carry further
what destiny failed to register....
heather wilkins
went back over your poem twice. excellent write.
went back over your poem twice. excellent write.
jadia4708au
Winds shall carry further what destiny failed to register...... lovely lines i admire.. nice poem
Winds shall carry further what destiny failed to register...... lovely lines i admire.. nice poem
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
A verse dancing on my heart...so beautiful Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
A verse dancing on my heart...so beautiful Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
robyn selters
Deeply satisfying, flowing, exquisite...
Deeply satisfying, flowing, exquisite...
Juan Olivarez
Well flowing poetry beautiful in it's context.
Well flowing poetry beautiful in it's context.
Ron Peat
Try the word "sunken" instead of "sunk. I just love the opening and closure on this poem. The wind is tied in so well. The winds of change. a poet friend//RH Peat
Try the word "sunken" instead of "sunk. I just love the opening and closure on this poem. The wind is tied in so well. The winds of change. a poet friend//RH Peat
Fay Slimm
A warrior song is this look into what lies ahead - you have scribed the shadowed sunshine so well Niks but positive tones are painted into the third stanza and the finale' is strong in the hope that feathers are seen in the "karmic cap" - - a wonderful array of imagery from your talented pen once again. Glad I caught this one.
A warrior song is this look into what lies ahead - you have scribed the shadowed sunshine so well Niks but positive tones are painted into the third stanza and the finale' is strong in the hope that feathers are seen in the "karmic cap" - - a wonderful array of imagery from your talented pen once again. Glad I caught this one.
Linda Winchell
Very well penned my poet friend. Bravo!
Very well penned my poet friend. Bravo!
sridevi
mmmm....a brooding introspective piece ...indeed once again footsteps shall adorn the mighty heads of dunes :)
mmmm....a brooding introspective piece ...indeed once again footsteps shall adorn the mighty heads of dunes :)
Lynda Robson
A beautiful write, so well composed
A beautiful write, so well composed
A beautiful and powerful poem that touches the heart... reaches out to the soul of the readers.