Phone Me.
At the back of today is tonight and tonight needs a shoulder
to cry on.
Tonight is in conflict.
Within light's framework of gloaming, at a time when dreams
start tearing at over-washed seams
night needs consoling.
A moment maybe, of sheer serendipity.
The bottle stands near and asks to be partner in shifting
the world from my weary head.
Ah - - but no !
Been there and done that and it just never works.
Tonight wants more than a mere bag of crisps and a
comforting drink.
It is hurting.
It skulks like an overused tune.
Like a bruised piece of music tonight needs soothing.
Not a good place to be is the back of today.
So phone me - - soon.
Floreann Cawley
Ring ring the wait is unbearable a great poem with deep meaning..Floreann
Ring ring the wait is unbearable a great poem with deep meaning..Floreann
Nikunj
This is beautiful ..innovative and swirling , sizzling like a wine coated whisper....wow is the word
This is beautiful ..innovative and swirling , sizzling like a wine coated whisper....wow is the word
Ben Gieske
Original viewpoint and creative piece. I hope you receive that phone call.
Original viewpoint and creative piece. I hope you receive that phone call.
Simply Bono Razek
enjoyed this Fay..kinda like deja vu for me.....i love this line........It skulks like an overused tune. Like a bruised piece of music tonight needs soothing.
enjoyed this Fay..kinda like deja vu for me.....i love this line........It skulks like an overused tune. Like a bruised piece of music tonight needs soothing.
Lynda Robson
Great write, we will all be phoning you :)
Great write, we will all be phoning you :)
Sandra Martyres
Fay I want to phone you right now..such a compelling write full of feeling.in a way only you can express...
Fay I want to phone you right now..such a compelling write full of feeling.in a way only you can express...
Ency Bearis
I wish, I could phone you now, but the problem is,a low a battery of my cell phone. Let me charge it for your comfort. But something also missing here - the tel. number. lol. An impressive and intriguing write Fay. Nice introspective thoughts and expressed well.
I wish, I could phone you now, but the problem is,a low a battery of my cell phone. Let me charge it for your comfort. But something also missing here - the tel. number. lol. An impressive and intriguing write Fay. Nice introspective thoughts and expressed well.
RAJ NANDY
The compelling nature of this poem Fay makes me to request for your number ! - Raj
The compelling nature of this poem Fay makes me to request for your number ! - Raj
carol
sometimes a phone call is all it takes to feel beter
sometimes a phone call is all it takes to feel beter
Stephen Paul
i will surely phone u soon as i have read this amazing creation of urs...great job..keep writing and sharing...!!!
i will surely phone u soon as i have read this amazing creation of urs...great job..keep writing and sharing...!!!
It's amazing how one phone call can put a spring in one's step, a smile on their face, or a feeling of being loved and cared for. I've felt this way before myself where sleep won't come as the mind chatters on. Wonderful expressions within this poem Fay.