I was planning to write a haiku poem, but it turns out to be like this. Even then hope you will like it..
Until The Morning Dew
You are like a mist of fog
in the morning dew
so sweet and fresh like always new
While you sleep you are like crickets
Peeping over in our soft and cottony pillow
And I can’t help myself but to whack you like a mosquito
So that I can sleep like a child until the morning dew
By. D.C.D. dated 02.01.2010
Jack Williams
This is good fun. To me it reads a little like two separate, though clearly connected, poems.
This is good fun. To me it reads a little like two separate, though clearly connected, poems.
Pendemic
That was a shocking but funny ending to your poem. Well done.
That was a shocking but funny ending to your poem. Well done.
Desiree
thank you very much carl, i will do that.. to be honest i dont know what title i have to put..once again thank you very much.. And heterodynemind thank you very much as well.
thank you very much carl, i will do that.. to be honest i dont know what title i have to put..once again thank you very much.. And heterodynemind thank you very much as well.
Carl Harris
Well, this turned out to be a charming and humorous write, Desiree, and in fact, a very delightful poem! You should give it a title, and I think the final four words of your last line would be a terrific title for this write! Carl.
Well, this turned out to be a charming and humorous write, Desiree, and in fact, a very delightful poem! You should give it a title, and I think the final four words of your last line would be a terrific title for this write! Carl.
heterodynemind
It makes me smile.It has a great resonance running through it.
It makes me smile.It has a great resonance running through it.
a fantastic job you've done ! romance & humor a nice combination ~very nice -Desiree~