Dedicated to my jealousy :-))

Proud Moon (Senryu # 35)

Moon drifted on clouds
Proud of a full prolonged night
Is the sun jealous?

(C) Abhinav Baruah, 2011

LightH2O
I agree with Shanmugam... they complement each other. Well penned!

 

seema chowdhury
Lovely as always.

C. P. Sharma
Love lorn moon/ Covers a million nautical miles/Embraces the placid sea. The sun feels jealous.

Cat
yes like sisters.. nicely done, cat

heather wilkins
beautiful

shanmugam
sun cannot. man is not jealous of woman

Rahul Aithal
Excellent senryu, Moonli.

Cat
beautiful, we all feel that green monster an times.. I have to put him back in his cage sometimes, cat

LightH2O
Is the jealousy related to the "full prolonged night"?...lol Great write!

Nikunj
A full prolonged night ..this phrase has a multitude of meanings embedded in its womb...wonderful poem

rarebird
Ah, that jealoucy! Dear MoonLi, thank you for this poem!

eleanor prince
I'm smiling... I so appreciate this wonderful write

Munia Khan
lol loved the dedication along with this wonder work.

sridevi
:) :) :)

Sandra Martyres
A super write Moonli...I love the sun being jealous of the moon!!