this is an old poem of mine. the picture was taken by me, it's a little small on here:(
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that's the link to see a better picture of it
talk is cheap
talk is cheap
words mean shit
..i can tell when you lie
it’s every time your lips move.
every word a new lie
every word another crack chiseled into my heart.
bounded by loves words
and false hope.
spoon feed more lies
we will all fall in the end.
i do not wish to be a mess
caused my loves grip
but a player i am in this fucked up game..
but players we all are
no matter how unfair it is.
walking away is harder than you think
losing it all to were to headed for a break down .
on the edge is were i stand
toes dangling on the end.
” jump” my mind says
but will i obey my minds wish
or cower in fear like a fucking baby
.. my lungs on the floor tired from screaming
poetic lines to a burning wall
my knees and arms bloody from trying to hard
but failing every time
when is the right time
to cave in and throw in the towel?
to hold up the flag
and hold it high that you can’t take loves beatings anymore..
pouring salt into open wounds
is better then trying to go on losing this battle that’s unbearable.
Powerful with incredible imagery. Very well written.
nice poem
pouring salt into open wounds is better then trying to go on losing this battle that’s unbearable....... Classic lines...............true
yes,i am :) i love my life and i loved it back when i wrote these.some of these poems are how i felt and some have nothing to do with how i feel, some i got inspired to write . people read too much into poetry sometimes.
yup but most of these are old poems.
I'm not sure I buy into your style, as esoteric styles tend to isolate & polarize, leaving the Author unable to garner a wide-range Reader base. That said, You are the Author, and you have the final word....And a good Writer always writes for themselves 1st & foremostand does not concern themselves with displeasing Readers.Also, I cannot agree with you moreso on your own comment regarding how Readers in general read too much into an Authors work, so as to believe that every single word they write is autobiographical! I have penned over 2,200 works since 2006,and of those 2,200 more than 2,100 are 100% pure fiction...Darkside, or tell-tale based. I never write about my personal life in public. Thats just me....Private. Yet, I can't tell you how many times I had to add on footnotes exclaiming the above work to be fictional, especially my Darkside work. Good Luck, young lady! ~FjR~