On My Way to You
On my way to you,
I found a shoe,
A lonely soul without a mate,
Tongue hanging out,
And half a lace,
And a wrinkled look
On her holy face.
Kesav V Easwaran
skillfully imaginative...the shoe talks a meaningful lot without talking
skillfully imaginative...the shoe talks a meaningful lot without talking
Ron Peat
Great metaphor. Nice one Don. Does she like the poem? :-) If you use a comma you don't need the "and" Might want to cut one or the other. I like the sound of the second one in the line. A poet friend, RH Peat
Great metaphor. Nice one Don. Does she like the poem? :-) If you use a comma you don't need the "and" Might want to cut one or the other. I like the sound of the second one in the line. A poet friend, RH Peat
nimal dunuhinga
O that saintly shoe...........!
O that saintly shoe...........!
narain, jay p.
nice and thoughtful write
nice and thoughtful write
Chaos1214
Ha ha... didn't your mom ever tell you about bringing home stray shoes... then again, mine told me all the time... a lot of good it did : )
Ha ha... didn't your mom ever tell you about bringing home stray shoes... then again, mine told me all the time... a lot of good it did : )
tom balch
Absolutely brilliant, much enjoyed.
Absolutely brilliant, much enjoyed.
Romeo Della Valle
Food for thoughts! Excellent write! Thanks for sharing!
Food for thoughts! Excellent write! Thanks for sharing!
great poem. good imagination.