Take it slow

Take it slow

It's a long road I hoed

Depths dug deep

Where sorrows reap


Take it slow

and burn out the furrow

of battered brow

and disallow


Take is slow

and melt the snow

of winter flower

at bosom's bower

Nikunj
Yes slow is the way ..sipping and imbuing the scensts and lessons that life offers ...just watch out for to in the last stanza ..

kath
This is a wonderful, one-step-at-a-time poem, filled with strong imagery and wise words. Excellent penning JoAnn. k xxx

Fay Slimm
An inspiring read JoAnn - the tempo fits so well with the line-length and words. A fine write.

Sandra Martyres
This is a very soft poem Joann..well written...

carol
this is beautiful joann

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Smooth, socratic and vintage Y O U, JoAnn!!! ~ ~ ~