~picture by christopf rubrecht~
~ ~~ r e p o s e ~~ ~
gently
she lay down
yearning
for sun's kiss
an early dew
to revive
petals worn
delicate
petticoat
silken white
shades of warmth
lingering softly
in shadows mute
ether's breath
seeking
sweet
repose...
Sana Rose
Elegant, gentle, simple, subtle, beautiful... I could find many more words to admire this unique poem with a rich imagery and feeling.. Thanks for writing it, in the first place!
Elegant, gentle, simple, subtle, beautiful... I could find many more words to admire this unique poem with a rich imagery and feeling.. Thanks for writing it, in the first place!
spysgrandson
a fine example of simplicity being tantamount to beauty--well done
a fine example of simplicity being tantamount to beauty--well done
Ken e Hall
Delicate wording lingering thru the entire poem sweet to the eyes ...a gem of pictures in the mind...regards
Delicate wording lingering thru the entire poem sweet to the eyes ...a gem of pictures in the mind...regards
Tahera Mannan
This is magical Robyn. Loved the images your words evoked.
This is magical Robyn. Loved the images your words evoked.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
No one... i mean no one but YOU, Robyn, can create quality Poetics a la SingleWord & Single Spacing! Happy Easter!...FjR...
No one... i mean no one but YOU, Robyn, can create quality Poetics a la SingleWord & Single Spacing! Happy Easter!...FjR...
j_kool
Nice poem my friend on love. Great job.
Nice poem my friend on love. Great job.
Bob Blackwell
A gentle unfolding of petals in the warming of the early sun's rays. Lovely words Robyn
A gentle unfolding of petals in the warming of the early sun's rays. Lovely words Robyn
kah
Lovely - a gentle poem of longing and hope.
Lovely - a gentle poem of longing and hope.
Dream Weaver
this is such a beautiful poem both to read and simply to look at...absolutly gorgeous when spoken aloud.
this is such a beautiful poem both to read and simply to look at...absolutly gorgeous when spoken aloud.
Frederick Kesner
Quite poignant in its beauty.
Quite poignant in its beauty.
shreeSridhar ॐ ❤ ☼
w0w! Sweet flows the stream of deepest longings here.
w0w! Sweet flows the stream of deepest longings here.
Susan Jarvis
An exquisite and delicate triumph of a poem ~ breathtakingly beautiful, Robyn. :)
An exquisite and delicate triumph of a poem ~ breathtakingly beautiful, Robyn. :)
rarebird
I am impressed! It is a real masterpiece!
I am impressed! It is a real masterpiece!
Kesav V Easwaran
nice imagination nice write...goes very well with the chosen image
nice imagination nice write...goes very well with the chosen image
Munia Khan
As I scroll down the page and read, I am getting drunk with this finest work Robyn..wow !! Amazing piece of work..
As I scroll down the page and read, I am getting drunk with this finest work Robyn..wow !! Amazing piece of work..
seema chowdhury
very nice and colorful poem.
very nice and colorful poem.
Lynda Robson
Lovely write, great imagery
Lovely write, great imagery
magnolia
sweet and delicate, just lovely !
sweet and delicate, just lovely !
sonetta
such delicateness in the words like the flower itself....
such delicateness in the words like the flower itself....
Karin Anderson
Superb imagery Robyn with sensitivity and beauty. I adore it!
Superb imagery Robyn with sensitivity and beauty. I adore it!
Fay Slimm
So soft and gentle Robyn - a dreamy read.
So soft and gentle Robyn - a dreamy read.
tom balch
Absolutely beautiful robyn, loved it, Tfs.
Absolutely beautiful robyn, loved it, Tfs.
Sandra Martyres
Exquisite imagery her Robyn...a beautiful write
Exquisite imagery her Robyn...a beautiful write
beautiful images and soothing flow of s word sounds.