Take Me
Take me
Take me and teach me how to fly
Like a bird dancing freely in the sky
Take me and teach me how to run
Like a Stallion running freely in the wild
Come now and take me
I will come to you freely
Take me now, take me forever
Let’s fly now and run together
By. D.C.D. dated 25.12.2009
Karin Anderson
A beautiful love poem with a flow that evokes freedom joy and togetherness. Lovely!
A beautiful love poem with a flow that evokes freedom joy and togetherness. Lovely!
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
i like this one
i like this one
Carl Harris
This is a quite enjoyable and expressive write, Desiree, and your phrasing in this fascinating poem was vivid in each line. You have us now wondering just who the lucky man may be! Carl.
This is a quite enjoyable and expressive write, Desiree, and your phrasing in this fascinating poem was vivid in each line. You have us now wondering just who the lucky man may be! Carl.
wonderful read~filled with love.....awesome-those last 2 lines !