Young hopeful for friend Jon

Young hopeful

I brushed my teeth and combed my hair
I hoped to charm a lady fair.
She never even noticed me.
Perhaps she didn’t want to see
My older brother laughed at me.
He said I was too young to be.
Making eyes at older girls
with bright blue eyes and golden curls
He said she was too old for me.
But I suspect that secretly
He is afraid that I might be
flirting more successfully
That he can do at twenty two.
A touch of green eyed jealousy.

Friday, 25 March 2011
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Debs
Yeah I liked the last four lines though.

Philip
Fine work as usual Ivor... Masterful

Romeo Della Valle
That is common situation among brothers. Until this day my identical twin brother is jeaulous of me, but what can you do? Let's the music play. Nice write my friend! Keep it up! Love ad Peace for always!...