Sensuous verse.

Are You Ready ?

With a new beginning
just about to start
a veritable avalanche
of white-heat emotion
heaves itself
from every weighty corner
of my heart.

As I loosen it to fall, sensuous
snowballing energy
will gather momentum,
from long-time, stored-up
unused vitality,
and pour me
into your unsuspecting life.

Tell me truthfully,
are you ready
for wild
untameable love ?

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Simply Bono Razek
sensual ~beautiful with a touch of naughtiness..I love this tender write Fay ...
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carol
fay, wild untamable its great!
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Kate Sparrow
Ohhh, I love this line the most! : and pour me into your unsuspecting life Sums it up for me - breathtaking!
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Carl Harris
Well, there's nothing naughty about enjoying the art of love making, Fay, and from the tone of your fine and charming write, I'd say that fortunate man may get more than he bargined for! Carl.
 
Baldric
Uncontrolled ,kinetic energy ,ready to be unleashed, the primeval source of love, that sooths the savage beast. passion unencumbered, fraught with one desire, two hearts beat as one, as if they were on fire.
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Susan Jarvis
A delicious metaphor - here's hoping your snowman is ready for the storm! ;)
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Pendemic
This is as beautiful as it is sensuous. Anyone would be honoured to receive this sensuous question.
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