picture is by jeffrey sullivan
my spirit's song...
don't bother me...
unless you hear
my spirit's song
I'm soaring true
beyond the fields
on harpist's strings
don't bother me...
unless you smell
the rising mists
transporting light
kissed by our sun
on angel's wings
don't bother me...
unless you sense
my joyful heart
my searching soul
and you can dance
on ether's wings
as one with me~~
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Sorry I missed this before dear poet...What a pleasure to read! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Sorry I missed this before dear poet...What a pleasure to read! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
ElderChild
Effortless! Seeking, desiring, experiencing that which Creation's Genius has to give. And then when breath returns from whence it came, Home, Home at last....... Till then: Father Help! and HE does.......
Effortless! Seeking, desiring, experiencing that which Creation's Genius has to give. And then when breath returns from whence it came, Home, Home at last....... Till then: Father Help! and HE does.......
Michele Vizzotti-White
Excellent :)
Excellent :)
cjkrieger
How the hell did I miss this gem? Wonderful!
How the hell did I miss this gem? Wonderful!
bruised-orange
oh i love this!
oh i love this!
Ken e Hall
Cracker love poem to read as is expected of your poems as you dance on ether's wings...regards
Cracker love poem to read as is expected of your poems as you dance on ether's wings...regards
Bob Blackwell
This was a joy to read Robyn, its flow was untethered, words used quite beautifully to make a rythmn for the heart. Bookmarked
This was a joy to read Robyn, its flow was untethered, words used quite beautifully to make a rythmn for the heart. Bookmarked
Raj Arumugam
The lines are amazing and the rhythm and phrasing as awesome as the scenery in that picture...Beautiful poem, robyn
The lines are amazing and the rhythm and phrasing as awesome as the scenery in that picture...Beautiful poem, robyn
Munia Khan
Can feel every line from your spirit song Robyn!All the readers are as one with you here.Amazing work.
Can feel every line from your spirit song Robyn!All the readers are as one with you here.Amazing work.
Kesav V Easwaran
Reading your poem, i too am soaring- beyond the fields- on harpists strings...would you allow me to join? beautiful thoughts, Robyn
Reading your poem, i too am soaring- beyond the fields- on harpists strings...would you allow me to join? beautiful thoughts, Robyn
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
"on harpist's strings..."....Now, who in God's Holy Name could not find that line flipping art frameable for its pictorial value alone, no less as a principal contributing line to the complete enchalada of a poem simpatico, such as the above work! You Do Rock, Robyn. Rockin' Robyn ? !~FjR~
"on harpist's strings..."....Now, who in God's Holy Name could not find that line flipping art frameable for its pictorial value alone, no less as a principal contributing line to the complete enchalada of a poem simpatico, such as the above work! You Do Rock, Robyn. Rockin' Robyn ? !~FjR~
heather wilkins
my spirit's song is a lovely spiriual song.
my spirit's song is a lovely spiriual song.
robyn selters
(Stella is not able to post comments for the moment as there is a glitch on the site... I offered to copy and paste her comment as follows...) from stella, Today 21.07 "this is so very beautiful Robyn.... i wish that i could" fly on ether's wings" with you"
(Stella is not able to post comments for the moment as there is a glitch on the site... I offered to copy and paste her comment as follows...) from stella, Today 21.07 "this is so very beautiful Robyn.... i wish that i could" fly on ether's wings" with you"
Sana Rose
So beautiful, robyn... Very much adhering to the senses... And with your usual gentle, subtle touch... :)
So beautiful, robyn... Very much adhering to the senses... And with your usual gentle, subtle touch... :)
Jenny Gordon
Wonderfully delightful call of love, flying and yet inviting the prospective other half in the ethereal flight soaring in such sweet imagery. It conveys the sense beautifully. I like it.
Wonderfully delightful call of love, flying and yet inviting the prospective other half in the ethereal flight soaring in such sweet imagery. It conveys the sense beautifully. I like it.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Delightfully beautiful...Soar! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Delightfully beautiful...Soar! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
RAJ NANDY
Your Spirit's Song - did make me soar to great heights ! Thanks , -Raj
Your Spirit's Song - did make me soar to great heights ! Thanks , -Raj
Meggie Gultiano
so peaceful..serene..and the perfect package..the flow of your words are just lovely, wanting me to say, more, more and more..and the last line is very memorable...:as one with me"
so peaceful..serene..and the perfect package..the flow of your words are just lovely, wanting me to say, more, more and more..and the last line is very memorable...:as one with me"
Karin Anderson
The picture you have chosen is superb Robyn and spiritual love is what you seek as the poem soars to great heights through the cloudy mist in the picture. A beautiful presentation~
The picture you have chosen is superb Robyn and spiritual love is what you seek as the poem soars to great heights through the cloudy mist in the picture. A beautiful presentation~
Ency Bearis
lovely notion and expressed well
lovely notion and expressed well
Abhinav Baruah
So smooth and moving!... "smell the rising mists transporting light kissed by our sun on angel's wings".. Beautiful !
So smooth and moving!... "smell the rising mists transporting light kissed by our sun on angel's wings".. Beautiful !
James T. Adair
Seems like a nice place but watch out for the grizzleys
Seems like a nice place but watch out for the grizzleys
Sandra Martyres
Just beautiful...
Just beautiful...
There is grace here as well as a little humor. While reading the poem, I thought "Hey, love me little lamb or leave me!"