Love's Survival.

Your sweet-worded gold darts
penetrate my soul,
they strike at my shadow,
cull and replace
any fears as they inject me
with warm declared love.

Let who will condemn me,
I have found my joy,
bittersweet as yet,
but I know love's repeated
dreaming in rhyme,
one day will find us repleted.

When fleshed, love breaches
desire, fire yearns for fire,
and in destiny's arms, undressed
patience is sated,
with long wait gone, we will sleep
soundly with love's survival

Simply Bono Razek
a real beauty to read Fay~as you know I'm a 100% push over for a romantic write~smile~

carol
surviving in dreams beautiful

heterodynemind
This has so much harmony going through it.

David Harris
Fay, a beautiful poem of Love's survival though any storm. Touching and tenderly written. Thank you for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

 

Baldric
Seems Cupids arrow hath penetrated , you and one associated. love has activated ,and desire accumulated, soon to be amalgamated, with the one affiliated,

Kate Sparrow
Tender and magical! I loved the opening lines: Your sweet-worded gold darts penetrate my soul, Stunning!

Carl Harris
Your wonderful phrasing in this outstanding poem is just simply exquisite, Fay, and this fine write of yearning and desire was a delight to read! Carl.