Tomorrow's Reality.
Every meagre attempt made to succeed
in our yesterday
creates tomorrow's exciting reality.
Look close at this need.
Effortless time spent can never be sung
with voiced delight,
when idleness blights then impregnates.
Bad vibes incite wrong .
We are the effect now let's be the cause,
and find reasons for living,
then gather daily achievement with zest.
Mornings will mean more.
Settled, we thrive in this moment alone,
moreover adorn it with prescence
and tomorrow's reality will simmer well.
Prepare it on yesterday's stove.
Carl Harris
Your exceptionally lovely prhasing made this a spendid poem, Fay, and your final verse was wonderfully expressive also! Carl.
Your exceptionally lovely prhasing made this a spendid poem, Fay, and your final verse was wonderfully expressive also! Carl.
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
You're a soulful dynamic Fay.I love this one though.
You're a soulful dynamic Fay.I love this one though.
Susan Jarvis
Words of wisdom imparted with the seemingly effortless eloquence of an accomplished poet - a masterpiece, Fay!
Words of wisdom imparted with the seemingly effortless eloquence of an accomplished poet - a masterpiece, Fay!
heterodynemind
I love how deep Faye's poems always go. And you often wind up somewhere completely unexpected.
I love how deep Faye's poems always go. And you often wind up somewhere completely unexpected.
Sandra Martyres
"and tomorrow's reality will simmer well. Prepare it on yesterday's stove." A perfect ending to a thought provoking and well written poem-Bravo Fay.
"and tomorrow's reality will simmer well. Prepare it on yesterday's stove." A perfect ending to a thought provoking and well written poem-Bravo Fay.
We reap what we sow! love your metaphors Fay! Baldric