Poet's romantic poetry.
Over My Heart.
I reach for your core of warmth
in musings and dreams.
They lift me lightly into your keeping.
Large loads float by, weightless,
after reading your verses.
Hurts melt in the heat of your words
and become no more a burden.
Holding you soul-close my spirit survives.
Time cannot enliven me
like warm phrasing and rhyme.
If this be love then love transforms parting.
Breathe then your gold, dear friend,
pen it over my heart.
Kate Sparrow
The transforming nature of love beautifully expressed here. Well done!
The transforming nature of love beautifully expressed here. Well done!
Eyan Desir
poetic and well written
poetic and well written
carol
last 2 lines are amazing
last 2 lines are amazing
David Harris
Fay, another beautiful poem. Wonderful flow to your words. Thank you for sharing them with us my friend. Hugs David
Fay, another beautiful poem. Wonderful flow to your words. Thank you for sharing them with us my friend. Hugs David
Carl Harris
As you so often do, Fay, your phrasing waxes most eloquent in this beautifully written and deeply touching poem. It's always a great pleasure to read your works! Carl.
As you so often do, Fay, your phrasing waxes most eloquent in this beautifully written and deeply touching poem. It's always a great pleasure to read your works! Carl.
heterodynemind
Wow this is something else. I really love the line, 'large loads float by, weightless, after reading your verses'; it's killer.
Wow this is something else. I really love the line, 'large loads float by, weightless, after reading your verses'; it's killer.
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
very good!
very good!
Susan Jarvis
A truly beautiful poem, Fay - 'Holding you soul-close my spirit survives' is a magnificent line.
A truly beautiful poem, Fay - 'Holding you soul-close my spirit survives' is a magnificent line.
Kerry O'Connor
What a beautiful concluding statement.
What a beautiful concluding statement.
oh my dear Fay this is simply beautiful....those 2 last lines...awesome !