Butterfly Effect by pattimast

Butterfly Effect

With weary frankness I lean into
Evenings diffident shadows,
Wavering hues, grays and blues
Peering between the cloistered stars:
Endless dream I forgot how to navigate
Encompassing moments built by tidal movements
And sudden divisions between orbital shells
Inertial havoc starts the blood rushing
The world's a quagmire of uninhabited space
With lonely islands of pulsating matter
Suns unnumbered, rippling the waves collapse
Take all my heartbeats too, that as I languish,
The resonance might start another avalanche
The fiery, seeding vacuum of dawns early light,
That old magician's hat trick.
But be merciful to me, centrifugal womb of time;
Both the product and the witness
The sum of the totality only here, only this, only now-
This forever world, always just on the brink
Of breaking into a hundred thousand new worlds,
From insignificance multiplied
Far beyond any meaningful purpose:
For nobody controls even one solitary particle down here.

Published December 21, 2009 Write a comment
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marvinbrato
Profound write... classic piece!
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Pendemic
Your words are pure raw art. The journeys you give us are amazing.
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Fay Slimm
Awesome work - - the thing zings into the ether and leaves the reader dizzy with the ride.... excellent.
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Sandra Martyres
Another Heterodynemind masterpiece, I agree with Kerry you take your readers to a new level in outer space and leave them thinking....
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Kate Sparrow
Interesting turn of the "lightness" of a butterfly used to describe a "heavy" concept about the nature of the world. Terrific!
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Susan Jarvis
Every beautifully crafted line lifts the reader to a mystical space beyond the mundane - superb!
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Kerry O'Connor
Wow! This is simply superb. If I had to name one factor that I liked the most in your poetry, it would be your ability to make us think outside the box. Your words have taken me beyond this solar system today.
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