Out of the Everything
Out of the everything, god made a world,
Commanded the void, called out one word:
Four mighty forces, together as one,
From out of its potency, dimensions uncurled.
Dials were set to a specific gravity,
One second this side oblivion; calamity.
Matter to matter, upon its own venue
Formed alliances put life on the menu.
Nobody knows if chance was the chain
Toppled the reactions, to start the refrain;
Nobody knows, could it happen again-
Could a non-sentient universe remember when..?
Twiggynoir
The last stanza is a winner. It's so delicately phrased to invoke a supple fear o f the unknown.
The last stanza is a winner. It's so delicately phrased to invoke a supple fear o f the unknown.
Catrina Heart
from void to something with refrain...lovely ending!!!
from void to something with refrain...lovely ending!!!
Written well to make one ponder about the nature of the universe and the role of God. Nicely done!