Waltz wave poem

Swing life away

Back
and forth
on
the swing
that is life.
Sometimes
you
fall but
sometimes you
fly. Sometimes you
beg to go
higher
but
sometimes
you're afraid.
One day
the
string will
snap...

Kerry O'Connor
..'the swing that is life...' a perfect metaphor.

Susan Jarvis
Philosophy meets poetry...beautifully :)

stephen
well done, you captured the rythm of the swing perfectly