Waltz wave poem
What my blue eyes saw
What
my blue
eyes
ever
saw in you
I don't
know!
But what
my blue eyes
see in his eyes,
however,
is a
new
story.
I see, for
once, love.
the
love you
hid.
Pendemic
Beautifully expressed, you inspire me to try this style!
Beautifully expressed, you inspire me to try this style!
heterodynemind
I think anyone saw those blue Valkyrie eyes would himself fall irreparably in love at once! (smile)
I think anyone saw those blue Valkyrie eyes would himself fall irreparably in love at once! (smile)
Carl Harris
The phrasing and choice of one man over another made this charming write an interesting poem, Valkyrie, since that choice was made for the right reasons. Carl.
The phrasing and choice of one man over another made this charming write an interesting poem, Valkyrie, since that choice was made for the right reasons. Carl.
I like this...your choice of the word " hid" added an unexpected complexity to what initially seemed to be a straight forward " moving on, trading up " story line.