Fall Into Me
Fall into me
Just let yourself fall
My embrace will catch you
And I will be your all
Fall into me
Intoxicate my heart
Oh how I long to catch you
And never do us part
Fall into me
Just trust that I am there
Let yourself just fall
I'll show how much I care
Fall into me
As I have fell into you
It's ok I am here
It's what lovers do
Fall into me
Leave nothing in the shadows
I will catch you with my love
And reveal how it grows
Fall into me
(C) Copyright Kirk Thomas 2011.
Jenny Gordon
Wow. Excellent! So very enticing, alluring, and delightfully sweet....how I'd love to! Beautiful expression of that most delightful sentiment of love. I love this!
Wow. Excellent! So very enticing, alluring, and delightfully sweet....how I'd love to! Beautiful expression of that most delightful sentiment of love. I love this!
Lynda Robson
Fall into love with me... really nice words here
Fall into love with me... really nice words here
Sandra Dodd
Pendemic has turned to a romanticized poet. All of us ladies love it. Great job, a heart well spent.
Pendemic has turned to a romanticized poet. All of us ladies love it. Great job, a heart well spent.
lovely76
Very sincerely written piece...I enjoyed reading this one...those words are from a true lover..I love this line "Fall into me and I will cath you with my love"...
Very sincerely written piece...I enjoyed reading this one...those words are from a true lover..I love this line "Fall into me and I will cath you with my love"...
rarebird
Truth and love in a perfect poem. I like it very much!
Truth and love in a perfect poem. I like it very much!
Ron Peat
I really like how you have used the refrain within the reading of this poem. Well done. But I think the last 3 lines are obvious to the reader in the sense of the loving caring spouse. So I think you could cut the last three lines and end the poem on "fall into me" which I personally think is a far stronger closure on the poem than "you'll be my falling wife" Just a thought. It has the same sense of meaning but with a stronger epiphany for a reader to find or discover the innuendo within the depth of the poem. A poet friend//RH Peat
I really like how you have used the refrain within the reading of this poem. Well done. But I think the last 3 lines are obvious to the reader in the sense of the loving caring spouse. So I think you could cut the last three lines and end the poem on "fall into me" which I personally think is a far stronger closure on the poem than "you'll be my falling wife" Just a thought. It has the same sense of meaning but with a stronger epiphany for a reader to find or discover the innuendo within the depth of the poem. A poet friend//RH Peat
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what an eloquent piece. so filled with truth and love. the flow caressing the page with each line.
what an eloquent piece. so filled with truth and love. the flow caressing the page with each line.
sridevi
I love this tenderly inked falling poem filled with so much sincerity
I love this tenderly inked falling poem filled with so much sincerity
Karin Anderson
The repetition of fall into me is so effective in this romantic love poem. The sentiment is trusting and appealing for someone special and reminds me of one of Celine Dion's songs and this has always touched me like this poem does too!
The repetition of fall into me is so effective in this romantic love poem. The sentiment is trusting and appealing for someone special and reminds me of one of Celine Dion's songs and this has always touched me like this poem does too!
tenderpoison
beautiful write K - to be free to fall, to be caught and held, understood and accepted - exist in my mind as concepts only, but they are concepts of what it should mean to be loved and to love. trust is built on just this...catch her when she falls :) fantastic writing.
beautiful write K - to be free to fall, to be caught and held, understood and accepted - exist in my mind as concepts only, but they are concepts of what it should mean to be loved and to love. trust is built on just this...catch her when she falls :) fantastic writing.
Mike
Very innovative and sweet...
Very innovative and sweet...
heterodynemind
Very nice lines. Love the ending.
Very nice lines. Love the ending.
Intoxicate my heart i hope if i ever go blind that you will read me your poems.