Breathless

Are you upset
`cause I like to steal your breath
and catch your last dream
it seems, I was a part of that.

In your mystical land
with purple flowers and yellow clouds
and I have kissed you hours and hours….

The sun was shy
the wind was quiet
all nature was on our site…

I need to see you once more…
That will be another story
I like to paint reality
with dreams and rays with silver intensity…

Ben Gieske
This creates an atmosphere all its own.

Nikunj
filled with passion and longing ...verses that are quite expressive and original in content ...to paint reality with dreams and rays with silver intensity is a marvellous thought ....

kdarcy
Awesome, loved it, be well

kah
Wonderful! Passionate and sensual - loved it!

Chaos1214
A sincere request to recapture the magic.

cousinsoren
I need to see you once more… That will be another story I like to paint reality with dreams and rays with silver intensity…" "Silver intansiy" is a rare and striking metaphor that speaks for the entire poem. i love this exquisite idyl , the last stanza especially.

Pendemic
So much love and devotion depicted in these lines. A great write.

Angelina Pandian
I need to see you once more.... says it all! Love makes Poets out of anyone and a mad lover - best poet ever! Love and passion [for and in everything we do] are the inner drives of any true poet.

Hampton
Impressive write...as always

Lynda Robson
Beautiful Stefy,

 

quasimodo
ah Stefy...a poem of breathtaking beauty...