Loving Showers (A Villanelle)

Poem title: Loving Showers (A Villanelle)

May I send thee my Lovingness.
As you awake in the morning.
As I`m in a state of Hopefulness.
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Mindful thinking in Thoughtfulness.
May I send kisses to wash thine eyes.
May I send thee my Lovingness.
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As I lay here in full Consciousness.
With the thought of love a winning prize. As I`m in a state of Hopefulness.
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In our mutual state of Selflessness.
All words uttered truth and never lies.
May I send thee my Lovingness.
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Both ways we have joint Respectfulness.
Which we exchange as day is dawning.
As I`m in a state of Hopefulness.
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I think of thee with a tenderness.
As thee listens to my poems calling.
May I send thee my Lovingness.
As I`m in a state of Hopefulness.

Weeping willow
Such a lovely poem,with uplifting words to the soul;}

nimal dunuhinga
I got wet really, even though I am an old crock!

 

GEETASHREE CHATTERJEE
In our mutual state of selflessness all word uttered truth and never lies....beautiful and deep!!!

 

treelight
a beautifully written piece my friend...

Linda Winchell
Bravo My dear Friend Philip on such a lovingly sent message of hopefulness. God be with you always my dear man, Linda

Elena S
Heart warming, yes, the state of conciousness can breathe out nothing else but love . Beautiful, thank you!

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Beautiful indeed! You are so skilled at this form. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Cat
beautiful, if it is like your poem send it now please! Cat

Theresa Ann Moore
A ray of sunshine to greet my morning cup of tea... inspirational.

nightmute
This has a tender softness that gives it such a lushful feel. Very endearing and heartfelt, this is a delightful read, sir.

Hoosier31
a beauitfully constructed poem that flows great and describes love and hope. it feels like a shower of love, emotions coming down like streams of rain dabbing paper with words

Floreann Cawley
Beautiful thoughts beautifully written..Floreann

Ben Gieske
I like this poem. Says a lot without being mushy.

nimal dunuhinga
A superb poem that pours from your heart!

Gerard Lebel
What a lovely read!!!

SaneJustBarely
If this script is followed how can you go wrong? Your friend in words, Pete

C. P. Sharma
Lovely love showers.

samanyan
SO VERY LOVELY TO READ...PLEASING TO THE MIND

robyn selters
a gentle grace permeates this elegant poem

patspoems
Absolutely lovely. A delightful read.... Pat

heather wilkins
beautifully written Philip.

LightH2O
Thanks for exposing me to a Villanelle Philip. Very well written and lovely words, enjoyed it much.

Michael J. Gale
Beautiful!

Karin Anderson
Beautiful sentiment in this well crafted Villanelle Philip and the title brings with it the shower of love to soak into your images~~

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Here, a heart speaks a tender verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Simply Bono Razek
oh very romantic...i like very much~~

Ben Gieske
Truly a lovely message to someone who loves poetry.

Bob Blackwell
The style magnifies the feeling, romantic thoughts.

shreeSridhar ॐ ❤ ☼
Sense & Feel the NOURISHMENT of Love dear !

 

seema chowdhury
very sweet and lovely.

 

GEETASHREE CHATTERJEE
I found it very romantic and exuberant.

Romeo Della Valle
It is not only the Rhyming but mainly the content carrying the message. I truly like this write and I can tell you, Philip, it really moved me! Excellent write! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always!...

erik99
Nice feelings, nicely expressed. Rhyming on "-ness" seems a bit of a cop-out, though, and what happened to the other rhyme? "Morning / calling / dawning" don't exactly match with "eyes / prize / lies."

Ben Gieske
Enjoyable to read and feel the feelings.

Simply Bono Razek
simply beautiful..filled with much tenderness..

Fay Slimm
A tender warm way of sharing a day - a fine Villanelle Philip.