Reflecting back to a beautiful moment that ''I'' soon will not forget....''I'' believe a poem should not just be ''words'' that are thrown down, but what ''I'' BELIEVE THEM TO BE TRUE!!! ANGEL WINGS..(p.s.) only using 15 words......
MOON DANCE
whispering willows wavering
gracefully beneath the painted moonlit sky
arousing unspoken passion for a moment
Carl Harris
This is a very impressive and deeply touching write, Angel Wing's. Though short (you used only 30 syllables in your fifteen words) it is a very expressive write, full of crystal clear imagery in every line. Carl.
This is a very impressive and deeply touching write, Angel Wing's. Though short (you used only 30 syllables in your fifteen words) it is a very expressive write, full of crystal clear imagery in every line. Carl.
Kerry O'Connor
You captured the mood and beauty of the scene very convincingly in this beautiful poem.
You captured the mood and beauty of the scene very convincingly in this beautiful poem.
Thankyou both, for your kind words!!!!! ANGEL WINGS