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Burst
Feelings Invoked,
So pained and treasured,
Silently sung,
A song of heartbreak.
In musical silence
Red, brown and leafless
Trees sway,
And hair thin rays of light
Burst through
glum grey cloulds.
Carl Harris
I don't think I've ever heard heartbreak more tenderly or beautifully expressed, fragile heart. This fine write communicates those emotions brilliantly to the reader. Carl.
I don't think I've ever heard heartbreak more tenderly or beautifully expressed, fragile heart. This fine write communicates those emotions brilliantly to the reader. Carl.
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
good one here
good one here
a_start
I like the thought of musical silence. A rest. Well-put. :)
I like the thought of musical silence. A rest. Well-put. :)
prathap suthan
that's beautifully put. a brilliant yet quiet explosion of shattered feelings.
that's beautifully put. a brilliant yet quiet explosion of shattered feelings.
I like the "hair thin rays of light" line very much.