Journey (Senryu )

after the rain
She sits beside me
The road is empty



Cloud in eyes
She crosses the silent river
Far away from home


(c) raju Baruah'2010

anupam
Very aptly drawn painting ..cloud in eyes...very touching ...nice work Raju

nimal dunuhinga
Oh! Excellent Raju.....and still it's my dilemma of this journey?

Sylvia Marquetta
a beautiful Senryu painting a vivid imagine of inner feelings

Susan Jarvis
Exquisitely, romantically beautiful. Your words do the form every justice.

Carol Mercer
Excellent..

Priyanka Bhowmick
along with solitude peaceful verses I am carried away :) :) :)

ritz_guns
Nice...

Shriram Sivaramakrishnan
a double Senryu...very good

tom balch
Beautiful words Raju.

sridevi
woww...beautiful...:)