I Love You, GoodBye
Is it I love You, Goodbye...from her side? .......
Is it time to let go a handful of stolen moments?
Is it time to sever free on a tie of illusive affairs?
Is it time to send off without a sound on pavements?
Bid adieu even her heart breaks in an endless cry?
It is not an easy task to tread mountains alone.
It is not an easy move to ascend on a void without destination.
To catch solitary life, at cross roads, is a slash on her wings.
The coast will dry for the languor of the sea to caress her lips;
Tangled isolation, no breeze, no gust of wind will pat the reef.
The world will stop, cascading heaven’s tears.
When it will dry? No one knows, until pain disappears.
This may be the paramount chart; living alone like hermit in an ocean.
Your destiny was sketched by time, framed on far edge of the canal.
She’ll be just a full moon hiding from the clouds.
She’ll be just a star watching you from afar.
For her love will see you through where ever you are….
this is so beautiful, deep feelings nicely described through this poem.
good writing, very smart.
a very nice and touchy poem Catrina. truly enjoyed every line of it. pl see my new poems too. take care
Very true ! True love sees you through wherever you are ! -Raj
this is very touchy and ammmazing poem dear catrina!
Ahaa,,, This is one of those poems which you have written with so much heart... I can feel your lifeblood running through your nice, smooth, poetic lines... Heartfelt poem ma'am. Very nice to read... (With love, Shan)
Indeed a player and a user of words, you play it good like a deck of cards, like picking up apples or flowers from a rose garden, exploiting its meaning and arranged these in an artful way and finally you put it like a rainbow in the highest pedestal. Exceptionally written better than the masters.
Love keeps us sustain hope in life... nice piece!
Love remains alive wherever we stay..... this ws simply wonderful......
Goodbyes are always sad and this elegy proves,many thanks indeed for your lovely comment Catrina on my poem' The Mammoth Power station'.
Lasting love even in isolation never loses lustre as the Star in the Sky!
good-byes are sad, but true love remains no matter what. very well written.