~ I was challenged by a friend to use the following words in a poem: holding, forgive, share, freedom, endeavour ... ~

Freedom Forever

Holding you close,

I can see forever in your eyes.

Our love, and the way we share,

feels like freedom to my soul...

I will endeavour

to make this feeling last,

long after you close

those beautiful eyes.

Forgive me, love,

if I never let you go,

as you're the best part of me.

I need you so much.

Paul Chafer
Again, excellent writing, as this has unseen depth, is so 'you' in every way. I could have picked this up from anywhere and know instantly that it was written by you, so good, Nadine. Again, so pleased you found inspiration somewhere. The love here overflows.

Sylvia Marquetta
beautiful soft flowing words of love.....

Debs
Superb!