once remembered gods

the magic perfume of yesterday's translucent woman lingers
like smoke breathes through an open window
why did the blue ocean wear a wake
pick a flower child once gone wild
yet slow stars always surround the morning
never could my heart become the prisoner of your smile

 

Lillian Susan Thomas
There is something very mesmerizing about the way you use surrealism combined with consonance and internal rhymes. Its like watching a magic trick, but I can never see what you are doing. Thank you for sharing.

Pendemic
Waves of thoughts flood me as I read this one over and over again. The wordage has a great flow and conjure images as you read the lines.

Angel Wing's
Great poem!!!! love your word use!!! its BEAUTIFUL!!!

marvinbrato
Poetic expression about a desired love but never comes!