~ transcending ~
i see you
then I don't
ephemeral elusive
hovering high above
mesmerizing stillness
floating transcending
sweeping plains
with meadows
in suspension
graciously
beyond
~~~~
(picture:
glowing
tones)
(100th
poem
on PF)
sensebreeze
Meditative and uplifting, what I experience in meditation...
Meditative and uplifting, what I experience in meditation...
Bob Blackwell
Congratulations Robyn, for being a thought provoking poet of one hundred verses. Your really are w riter of note....here's to the next 100!!
Congratulations Robyn, for being a thought provoking poet of one hundred verses. Your really are w riter of note....here's to the next 100!!
2ndVoice
This flows beautifully. Takes you to the nether land where Pastoral scenes fade in and out on visionary breath.
This flows beautifully. Takes you to the nether land where Pastoral scenes fade in and out on visionary breath.
Elena S
Congratulation!!! With every poem you have given to some of us a hand to transcend ourselves. With every beauty that you shared another smile took birth on earth. Keep sharing , I love your poems ,a hundred thanks!!
Congratulation!!! With every poem you have given to some of us a hand to transcend ourselves. With every beauty that you shared another smile took birth on earth. Keep sharing , I love your poems ,a hundred thanks!!
Kesav V Easwaran
Nice write Robyn...congrats on your achievement
Nice write Robyn...congrats on your achievement
LightH2O
Lovely and captivating with its elusiveness.
Lovely and captivating with its elusiveness.
shanmugam
the style is unique and intereting
the style is unique and intereting
Munia Khan
Congrats to you Robyn! And what a glorious work to celebrate your century here!! Loved it.
Congrats to you Robyn! And what a glorious work to celebrate your century here!! Loved it.
Chaos1214
Super write! Strangely enough, elusiveness is the most attractive quality. Nothing seems to fascinate people more than the thing they can never quite put their finger on.
Super write! Strangely enough, elusiveness is the most attractive quality. Nothing seems to fascinate people more than the thing they can never quite put their finger on.
Sana Rose
Congratz for hitting the century! And a wonderful poem, a shapely one at that! :)
Congratz for hitting the century! And a wonderful poem, a shapely one at that! :)
Rahul Aithal
Congratulations on your 100th poem, Robyn. Well done.
Congratulations on your 100th poem, Robyn. Well done.
vidhya
perfect words,well written.
perfect words,well written.
RAJ NANDY
Very well expressed in few poetic words ! -Raj
Very well expressed in few poetic words ! -Raj
Sandra Martyres
Excellent poetry Robyn....one of your best
Excellent poetry Robyn....one of your best
Yacov Mitchenko
Vintage Robyn. Delicate, vivid, with fine line breaks.
Vintage Robyn. Delicate, vivid, with fine line breaks.
Karin Anderson
A sensitive and gracious poem hovering with beauty beyond this mundane world. A stunning write Robyn.
A sensitive and gracious poem hovering with beauty beyond this mundane world. A stunning write Robyn.
Susan Jarvis
Ethereal and oh, so very beautiful. :)
Ethereal and oh, so very beautiful. :)
Fay Slimm
A wavering wisp of a beautiful dreamy piece Robyn - the wistful air floats to a conclusion that brings out the glowing tones of the chosen image so well.
A wavering wisp of a beautiful dreamy piece Robyn - the wistful air floats to a conclusion that brings out the glowing tones of the chosen image so well.
Jenny Gordon
Very lovely, with beautiful light intrigue, ethereal and filmy, yet with elusive substance, just as the one to whom it appears written. Like a breath of odorous air, it entices, as a butterfly escapes, a pleasure, yet tinged with bittersweet. Wonderful accompanying visual enhancing it. I enjoyed it very much, as of a sweet taste lingering with a faint scent alluring.
Very lovely, with beautiful light intrigue, ethereal and filmy, yet with elusive substance, just as the one to whom it appears written. Like a breath of odorous air, it entices, as a butterfly escapes, a pleasure, yet tinged with bittersweet. Wonderful accompanying visual enhancing it. I enjoyed it very much, as of a sweet taste lingering with a faint scent alluring.
Aha, YOU are celebrating your 100th poem on PF with this BEAUTY, my CONGRATS dear Robyn, as long as I have known you here on PF you have only written very beautiful poetry, jewels and gems. A poem so sublime as this, I can read it again and again, always a delicious treat to read...floating transcending....in suspension graciously....Robyn, you are Transcending yourself with your great talent...thank you for this poem of you, thank you for sharing....