Meter is 5/4
Picture is by Joel Bedford
~ where time stands still ~
Give me a moment
far from the crowds
down by the river
where I can rest
Give me a moment
wandering free
toes in a cool stream
always the best
Give me a moment
sunlight diffused
drink in the beauty
now I feel blessed
windowguy
Often times a moment isall it takes. Nice one.
Often times a moment isall it takes. Nice one.
Simply Bono Razek
a so soothing write--simply beautiful !
a so soothing write--simply beautiful !
shanmugam
a beautifuly worded poem
a beautifuly worded poem
Sana Rose
Now ... this is absolutely beautiful, Robyn! Perfect rhythm in this form and so sweet a poem... Felt so good to read it! :) thank you....
Now ... this is absolutely beautiful, Robyn! Perfect rhythm in this form and so sweet a poem... Felt so good to read it! :) thank you....
Ezna Stephna
Wow! I like reading this poem, it touched my heart. Really a very stupendous idiom..... Give me time, to inscribe about poet -robyn selters .who stylish chant its rhyme. Now I am joyful to approve his piece which he wrote.....Superb
Wow! I like reading this poem, it touched my heart. Really a very stupendous idiom..... Give me time, to inscribe about poet -robyn selters .who stylish chant its rhyme. Now I am joyful to approve his piece which he wrote.....Superb
Sylvia Frances Chan
it reminds me of Thomas Hardy's Far from the Maddening Crowd... Give me a moment wandering free toes in a cool stream always the best. What a blessed life!! Beautiful poem and very lovely words!!
it reminds me of Thomas Hardy's Far from the Maddening Crowd... Give me a moment wandering free toes in a cool stream always the best. What a blessed life!! Beautiful poem and very lovely words!!
Ezna Stephna
LOVELY PIC........its life of relaxation .... as well a beautiful poem well penned.
LOVELY PIC........its life of relaxation .... as well a beautiful poem well penned.
Munia Khan
And you never fail to make us feel blessed with your heavenly poetry Robyn.This is one brilliantly composed verse that quenched every reader's thirst.Great work.
And you never fail to make us feel blessed with your heavenly poetry Robyn.This is one brilliantly composed verse that quenched every reader's thirst.Great work.
Abhinav Baruah
Very soothing indeed... Like it!
Very soothing indeed... Like it!
Louis Rams
a place of relaxation from all the devastation. tfs this beautiful poem.
a place of relaxation from all the devastation. tfs this beautiful poem.
Bob Blackwell
Now this is life, to enjoy the beauty of nature and then feel blessed. Lovely write....wise too!!
Now this is life, to enjoy the beauty of nature and then feel blessed. Lovely write....wise too!!
LightH2O
So lovely, it makes me feel relaxed and appreciative of the beautiful nature that surrounds us.
So lovely, it makes me feel relaxed and appreciative of the beautiful nature that surrounds us.
Fay Slimm
The appeal in this short verse goes beyond the words. A winner dear Robyn without a doubt. A delightful read.
The appeal in this short verse goes beyond the words. A winner dear Robyn without a doubt. A delightful read.
Jenny Gordon
Very beautiful! The imagery seems to poignantly evoke a sigh of that blest relief, making the poem itself a refreshing meditation. Lovely! I really enjoyed it.
Very beautiful! The imagery seems to poignantly evoke a sigh of that blest relief, making the poem itself a refreshing meditation. Lovely! I really enjoyed it.
Andrew
You paint a picture with words. Lovely work! Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it!
You paint a picture with words. Lovely work! Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it!
Gita Ashok
This is so tender, so serene, so heartfelt. I love the imagery here. I agree with Rahul - you have echoed here many of our sentiments. Reminds me of a quote of Brian Andreas: “Time stands still best in moments that look suspiciously like ordinary life.”
This is so tender, so serene, so heartfelt. I love the imagery here. I agree with Rahul - you have echoed here many of our sentiments. Reminds me of a quote of Brian Andreas: “Time stands still best in moments that look suspiciously like ordinary life.”
nimal dunuhinga
I see the path to Nirvana here! Thanks.
I see the path to Nirvana here! Thanks.
Karin Anderson
A delightful gentle lulling poem about the love of nature. I really like "toes in a cool stream" too! Its great to see a poem from you Robyn~
A delightful gentle lulling poem about the love of nature. I really like "toes in a cool stream" too! Its great to see a poem from you Robyn~
Sandra Martyres
A beautiful soothing write Robyn..good to see you posting ....
A beautiful soothing write Robyn..good to see you posting ....
PrEmJi PrEmJi
frank rightly said it! great write!
frank rightly said it! great write!
RAJ NANDY
Friend , YOU HAVE COMPOSED LIKE A TRUE ZEN MASTER ! - -Raj
Friend , YOU HAVE COMPOSED LIKE A TRUE ZEN MASTER ! - -Raj
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Nirvana poetica...You got me in cruise-serenity, young lady, and i'm likin it much, yes Robyn, i am ! Pleasure to read you....Good to see you back on site....Been awhile yes? Or perhaps we be those 2 ships in the night!lol!~FjR~
Nirvana poetica...You got me in cruise-serenity, young lady, and i'm likin it much, yes Robyn, i am ! Pleasure to read you....Good to see you back on site....Been awhile yes? Or perhaps we be those 2 ships in the night!lol!~FjR~
Rahul Aithal
You have voiced our feelings, Robyn.
You have voiced our feelings, Robyn.
heather wilkins
beautiful work.
beautiful work.
MARYT.LIVE
I really enjoyed this poem and it's lovely imagery about nature! tfs
I really enjoyed this poem and it's lovely imagery about nature! tfs
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah! Absolutely beautiful!...Tranquil... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Ah! Absolutely beautiful!...Tranquil... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah! Absolutely beautiful!...Tranquil... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Ah! Absolutely beautiful!...Tranquil... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
bruised-orange
moments like that feed our souls. nothing like nature to bring us peace and calm. much enjoyed!
moments like that feed our souls. nothing like nature to bring us peace and calm. much enjoyed!
A joy filled wonder! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing