The Voyeurism of a Morris Minor
In exhilaration
She took off
Her clothes,
As she saw the Jaguar
Varnished
And polished in
Metallic green
Iron rims roaring,
It stood demanding,
Asking to be
Loved
Caressed
And cuddled
So, she
Ran to
The Jaguar
Opened his doors
And let herself in……
As she entered,
Arms open,
Legs spread
in divine fashion
laid herself
among cushions
Whilst
She made
Love through
the night,
to yet another
fortnight,
curling and hurling
Around his
wheels..
making love
till his battery
twirled
with heat
As a lowly
voyeur,
an antique
Morris-Minor
with a wrecked
roof and a tarnished
Rims wrapped
in grim veil,
shirt torn
and face gashed,
An antique
Morris-Minor
observing the scene,
scrutinizing her ways,
looking at
her with
his breath
held high upon
his nostrils,
Let out a catastrophic
Sigh of total
Frustration!!!!!
*Morris Minor and Jaguar are references to car models..
Photo from-- http://www.flickr.com/photos/46340130@N08/4427616017/
Shashendra Amalshan copyright 2010
hahaha! Splendid....All this novelty in subject and presentation makes poetry more readable and adorable...
You have really made me SMILE with this gem! A society where speed, money and status is far superior to a slower, cheaper model. Ah! but she hasn't seen our 1937 shiny yellow Chevrolet with a platform to take her to the heights of desire. As usual your originality deserves thundering applause!
This is a brilliant 'take' on the melding of sexuality and speed. Every ad man should read it! And learn from a master of the quirky (and the erotic too!). I love your grumpy Morris Minor. I can see him pecking away on the computer watching porn with a mixture of vicarious lust and resentment. Great write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Lust for the cars... Whoa! Great idea here...written so sensually that jaguar and MM do seem like hot men..jeez! :-)
Rims wrapped in grim veil,...is my most fav lines here Shan.And you have made the readers wonder again as regards your skillful imaginary mind.Your brain cells work always great.Loved this piece.
your imagination held me captive in this story poem from beginning to end........great penning!
LOL Shan...your fascination with cars continue to grow :) and I do agree...ther's something very sexy about cars LOL...why dont you read this http://www.poetfreak.com/text/57893/love-at-first-sight.html :)
shashi...interesting write...
pstt.wow..enjoyed reading this Sha..love it..love it
brilliant imagination Shan...you ride on your sexy wheels high!
As always you hold your readers to the end and I always enjoy your car tinkering with such humour in your sadness Sash...got a terrible HongKong flu we got it 10 days ago in Shanghai it was only 6 degrees bugger....regards