Dang............

Just A Dream

Transported

by just your smooth voice.

I close my eyes

and shut out the world.

Then I see the waves of golden summer wheat

and as I lay down the grass envelopes me.

I feel my body being raised to the warm sun.

It's as if I'm on a long lazy river ride.

Then I smell the sweetness of the electrical arc

changing O2 into O3 mixed with your long hard day.

As I open my eyes, I see you above me

looking down with your broad shoulders

and school boy smile.

Finally...

I see your face.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Sweet! Sweet! to a Divine Sweetness...love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Irwin (aka David Irwin Phillips)
A very nicely written and unassuming piece that leaves one with a sense of well being.

Debs
A lvoely dream, a lovely poem.

eleanor prince
I feel warm and happy reading your beaut poem

Martin Swords
Love is a full field. And a warm sun. And a dreamy day. And a dream. Thanks. Martin

Patricia
An impressive, wonderful write

La Finita
Magic, romantic, beautiful! Great write

Sylvia Marquetta
a beautiful dream and lovely poem.....

yelena
Wow, this poem just floats, so airy and dreamy..Beautiful, JoAnn. :)

maryc
beautiful assembling of phrases.

Pendemic
Such a beautiful dream! I enjoyed the trance-like feel of this piece.

michael burke
A most beautiful and vivid write, JoAnn. I loved every majestic word.

carol
such a lovely dream

kath
A beautiful dream-like poem Jo-Ann! The well-chosen words almost float off the page. :) xxx