The Quiet Storm

It stealthy creeps through the cracks

and relentlessly seeps.

It numbingly tranquilizes

and strangles

and sneaks

This dobbin of unobtrusiveness

sets up shop

and composses

it's dark clouds of sadden symphony

Ben Gieske
This definately captures the mood. Storms don't last long. I hope this one has dissapated.

 

seema chowdhury
oh, its sad, hope this storm is over now.

 

countryfog
Storms inspire such a range of emotions . . . and evocative poems.

carol
awesome bookmarking

magnolia
wonderfully dark and deep.the last line speaks volumes.

robyn selters
Love the concept of a quiet storm... lots of great subliminal tension producing pleasing effect. Good work!

sonetta
ah! I like this dark symphony.....is it by Beethoven? :)