Sun

Swollen fire blazing
Upon the mud cooking
New spirit feasting

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yelena
Very visual, such a vivid picture here!
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sridevi
Beautiful...and elegant :)
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Kesav V Easwaran
yes; the sun provides...nice meaningful imagery your short poem provides, Indira...
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RAJ NANDY
True ! The sun will last another million years , but I am not sure about human beings ! We would become 'spirits' by then ! Thanks for sharing , -Raj
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