A Suite of modern Senryu with less syllables. Music - Autumnal Emotion
Graphics AndreaPetcu(oceanflower1) I have written this Senryu on behalf of the male in the video.
Tryst's Fall (Suite of Senryu)
liquidambar leaves
pile too many hues of you
star blink the sun~~
maple tree leaf bare
oak still flaunts glory of the
Autumnal fall~~
chlorophyll faint
one lonely leaf floats
through mist's down fall~~
leaves fall and
high rise to your hair's
galaxy of gold~~
scarlet temptress
cherry leaves are your lips
gone with the wind~~
full moon maple
we'll slide with gold leaves down
slippery dip's silver~~
we're weeping maples
Autumn’s bowl pans gold
spangles crimson tears~~
bird's wings span rain sticks
call water cascades
drown Autumn's flames
Last Autumn leaf cracks
in the whip
of Winter’s first whoosh~~
I'll name you Autumn
golden rain tree
of tryst's fall~~
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Wow Karin this is absolutely amazing and the music and dvd were the icing on the cake. You have a great talent - thank you for sharing..... Pat
Mesmerising depth and heart filling imagery ....you never fail to charm me with your magic ...
Very beautiful with delightful imagery, deliciously lovely! Impressive and wonderful.
Karin, you are sooooooo poetically wonderful!...I am a song catching my breath falling in the sweet wind of this lovely poem. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
perfect package..perfect music to perfect words..I was carried away by the simplicity , beauty and enchanting presentation here..You painted this in a very beautiful manner right from the heart.. A great write..!!wow!!
Yes, again you painted a beautiful image of autumn, and just use lovely words... beautiful poem. :)
As always you never leaves the reader without anything. Its such a pleasure to read the Autmnal picture.
Finally managed to get the dvd and music... so sublime and uplifting... a real joy to experience along with your fine poetry
I am overwhelmed by the beauty of your words. Combining them with the video and the music creates a work of art in and of itself. Thank you for this lovely experience here on a bitter winter’s day.
I'm awed by this superb work, Karin. Senryu in this form is striking in its simplicity and I'm moved by your incredibly beautiful metaphors
And I am celebrating Karin day today :) What a fantastic work here again dear Karin.The Autumnal beauty has been blessed by this amazing piece of poetry.Every single Senryu here is a sheer delight.Excellent work my friend.
Exquisite use of words. So simple and yet, they show the melancholy and beauty of Autumm. Amazing match with images and wonderful music. Beautiful!!
This is an autumnal wonder. Very, very beautiful. Maggie
Karin, your skill is outstanding and this is an amazing showcase of wonderfully flowing Senryu... so beautiful and well-honed
An autumnal cascade of colours Karin, we are looking forward to Spring here, thanks for this gorgeous write
A feast of autumn, I like the first which rang out as you read on more form thegift of you pen wonderful...regards
love the colors, and the sad longing for something that happened or never happened (?) ....it doesn't matter for it's time to say goodbye.....
this is so beautiful bookmarking
real poetic treat
A feast of haiku poems Karin - each one a winner. It is difficult to choose which one I like best...(TFS)
beautiful sen suite Karin...the last autumn leaf imagery is excellent and touching
Right from the liquidambar leaves to the “scarlet temptress cherry leaves are your lips gone with the wind~~” the reference to the famous classic…this poem flows like melancholy subdued and understated.Karin you are a most brilliant poet and I have so much to learn from you…lots …lots and really lots of love from India,Sri
elegant my dear
What a beautiful way of expression and the images so vividly clear. A well penned piece.
Perfect combination of music and word - oh Karin this is an overwhelming experience - - moving almost to tears the quiet pathos waterfalls its way into a sparkling and graceful finale. Brilliant work.
A magnificent compilation, Karin.