A Suite of modern Senryu with less syllables. Music - Autumnal Emotion
Graphics AndreaPetcu(oceanflower1) I have written this Senryu on behalf of the male in the video.


Tryst's Fall (Suite of Senryu)

liquidambar leaves

pile too many hues of you

star blink the sun~~




maple tree leaf bare

oak still flaunts glory of the

Autumnal fall~~





chlorophyll faint

one lonely leaf floats

through mist's down fall~~




leaves fall and

high rise to your hair's

galaxy of gold~~




scarlet temptress

cherry leaves are your lips

gone with the wind~~





full moon maple

we'll slide with gold leaves down

slippery dip's silver~~





we're weeping maples

Autumn’s bowl pans gold

spangles crimson tears~~





bird's wings span rain sticks

call water cascades

drown Autumn's flames





Last Autumn leaf cracks

in the whip

of Winter’s first whoosh~~




I'll name you Autumn

golden rain tree

of tryst's fall~~





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michael burke
A magnificent compilation, Karin.
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patspoems
Wow Karin this is absolutely amazing and the music and dvd were the icing on the cake. You have a great talent - thank you for sharing..... Pat
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Nikunj
Mesmerising depth and heart filling imagery ....you never fail to charm me with your magic ...
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Jenny Gordon
Very beautiful with delightful imagery, deliciously lovely! Impressive and wonderful.
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Karin, you are sooooooo poetically wonderful!...I am a song catching my breath falling in the sweet wind of this lovely poem. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Meggie Gultiano
perfect package..perfect music to perfect words..I was carried away by the simplicity , beauty and enchanting presentation here..You painted this in a very beautiful manner right from the heart.. A great write..!!wow!!
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Celine
Yes, again you painted a beautiful image of autumn, and just use lovely words... beautiful poem. :)
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Kamala
As always you never leaves the reader without anything. Its such a pleasure to read the Autmnal picture.
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robyn selters
Finally managed to get the dvd and music... so sublime and uplifting... a real joy to experience along with your fine poetry
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Aria
I am overwhelmed by the beauty of your words. Combining them with the video and the music creates a work of art in and of itself. Thank you for this lovely experience here on a bitter winter’s day.
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eleanor prince
I'm awed by this superb work, Karin. Senryu in this form is striking in its simplicity and I'm moved by your incredibly beautiful metaphors
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Munia Khan
And I am celebrating Karin day today :) What a fantastic work here again dear Karin.The Autumnal beauty has been blessed by this amazing piece of poetry.Every single Senryu here is a sheer delight.Excellent work my friend.
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La Finita
Exquisite use of words. So simple and yet, they show the melancholy and beauty of Autumm. Amazing match with images and wonderful music. Beautiful!!
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magnolia
This is an autumnal wonder. Very, very beautiful. Maggie
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robyn selters
Karin, your skill is outstanding and this is an amazing showcase of wonderfully flowing Senryu... so beautiful and well-honed
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Lynda Robson
An autumnal cascade of colours Karin, we are looking forward to Spring here, thanks for this gorgeous write
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Ken e Hall
A feast of autumn, I like the first which rang out as you read on more form thegift of you pen wonderful...regards
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sonetta
love the colors, and the sad longing for something that happened or never happened (?) ....it doesn't matter for it's time to say goodbye.....
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carol
this is so beautiful bookmarking
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
real poetic treat
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Sandra Martyres
A feast of haiku poems Karin - each one a winner. It is difficult to choose which one I like best...(TFS)
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Kesav V Easwaran
beautiful sen suite Karin...the last autumn leaf imagery is excellent and touching
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sridevi
Right from the liquidambar leaves to the “scarlet temptress cherry leaves are your lips gone with the wind~~” the reference to the famous classic…this poem flows like melancholy subdued and understated.Karin you are a most brilliant poet and I have so much to learn from you…lots …lots and really lots of love from India,Sri
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oskar
elegant my dear
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Pendemic
What a beautiful way of expression and the images so vividly clear. A well penned piece.
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Fay Slimm
Perfect combination of music and word - oh Karin this is an overwhelming experience - - moving almost to tears the quiet pathos waterfalls its way into a sparkling and graceful finale. Brilliant work.
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