My Razzle Dazzle Dreams
Danced down
The yellow brick road, searching for
Promises made and kept.
Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing
RonaldLearner
This is definitely a commercial standard poem. Saying so much in very few words. That makes each word of your My Razzle Dazzle Dream valuable hence a rich poem.
This is definitely a commercial standard poem. Saying so much in very few words. That makes each word of your My Razzle Dazzle Dream valuable hence a rich poem.
cjkrieger
So much said ... I love the way your poem say so much in so few words
So much said ... I love the way your poem say so much in so few words
Ron Peat
Don't stand to long in the intersection; it's dangerous! A smile creates far better gold and lasts longer than the open road. A poet friend RH Peat
Don't stand to long in the intersection; it's dangerous! A smile creates far better gold and lasts longer than the open road. A poet friend RH Peat
Weeping willow
Still searching for promises made,as I travel the yellow brick road of life,nice write:}
Still searching for promises made,as I travel the yellow brick road of life,nice write:}
SaneJustBarely
Pay no attention to that man behind the curtain if you are looking for the honest truth. Your friend in words, Pete
Pay no attention to that man behind the curtain if you are looking for the honest truth. Your friend in words, Pete
lynnbglover
Dorothy, I always like to read Robert Frost "The Road Not Taken' and always think "Did I take the right one" I believe that in this one you took the right road. Great Job.
Dorothy, I always like to read Robert Frost "The Road Not Taken' and always think "Did I take the right one" I believe that in this one you took the right road. Great Job.
cjkrieger
It is no wonder why so many comment on your poems, you say so much in so few words… kudos
It is no wonder why so many comment on your poems, you say so much in so few words… kudos
SaneJustBarely
Those promises can be slippery unless made by someone who knows and loves your soul. Well said my friend. Your friend in word, Pete
Those promises can be slippery unless made by someone who knows and loves your soul. Well said my friend. Your friend in word, Pete
Ben Gieske
I hope you found some. I read that it doesn't matter which road we take as long as we are going in the right direction. That might not be the case here.
I hope you found some. I read that it doesn't matter which road we take as long as we are going in the right direction. That might not be the case here.
yelena
so much sparkling hope in few lines. beautiful, Dorothy.
so much sparkling hope in few lines. beautiful, Dorothy.
nimal dunuhinga
Certainly that yellow brick unrestricted road knows everything?
Certainly that yellow brick unrestricted road knows everything?
Patrick McFarland
Wonderful, but tell me...Is this something all Dorothy's do?
Wonderful, but tell me...Is this something all Dorothy's do?
Cat
ejoyable to read you always! Cat
ejoyable to read you always! Cat
silence
a lovely spin of words and imagery
a lovely spin of words and imagery
Ron Peat
Hey if that's the first line get a better title like "wishes, hopes, & schemes" "moon wishes and hopeful sunshine" And anybody that find your gold road baby isn't worth havin' .... a poet friend//RH Peat
Hey if that's the first line get a better title like "wishes, hopes, & schemes" "moon wishes and hopeful sunshine" And anybody that find your gold road baby isn't worth havin' .... a poet friend//RH Peat
H. Baddley
Very poignant. I think my dreams do the same from time to time. Beautifully penned!
Very poignant. I think my dreams do the same from time to time. Beautifully penned!
aequilla
Nostalgic
Nostalgic
Chaos1214
Razzle-dazzle dreams just ought to be dancing... ha ha... They don't sound like they need validation : D
Razzle-dazzle dreams just ought to be dancing... ha ha... They don't sound like they need validation : D
aryaindia
A freshness in presentation and feel.
A freshness in presentation and feel.
LightH2O
Lovely and whimsical.
Lovely and whimsical.
Sylvia Frances Chan
A delightful song and a brilliant poem, Dorothy!! I like your all your songs plus the singer, God Bless You, Dorothy!
A delightful song and a brilliant poem, Dorothy!! I like your all your songs plus the singer, God Bless You, Dorothy!
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
reminds me of some things... thanks!!!
reminds me of some things... thanks!!!
MARYT.LIVE
A very sweet poem with great imagery. Always nice to be reminded of such great movie!
A very sweet poem with great imagery. Always nice to be reminded of such great movie!
twilights descent
Very nice words my friend
Very nice words my friend
Andrew Blakemore
This is very sweet Dorothy, a delightful poem.
This is very sweet Dorothy, a delightful poem.
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
Your dreams, poems and your heart always dance.You are an eternal poetic dancer. yoursJVL
Your dreams, poems and your heart always dance.You are an eternal poetic dancer. yoursJVL
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Emerald City is just a wee bit up the road...Don't miss yer' exit, missy ! Enjoyed this much, D.! ~FjR~
Emerald City is just a wee bit up the road...Don't miss yer' exit, missy ! Enjoyed this much, D.! ~FjR~
Dr.subhendu kar
hope when resonate to write in red, the promises pledged to quest , wonderful write
hope when resonate to write in red, the promises pledged to quest , wonderful write
Michael J. Gale
great write: Did ya know that in The Wizard of Oz,Dorothy's character name was Dorothy Gale? Nice movie fable I'd say.
great write: Did ya know that in The Wizard of Oz,Dorothy's character name was Dorothy Gale? Nice movie fable I'd say.
RAJ NANDY
A NICE VIBRATING POEM DOROTHY ! -Raj
A NICE VIBRATING POEM DOROTHY ! -Raj
narain, jay p.
very nice
very nice
deeptangshu
Beautiful....
Beautiful....
spbsdude
Interesting poem with a nice rhythm to it. I like it.
Interesting poem with a nice rhythm to it. I like it.
seema chowdhury
promises made and kept............. is the sweetest thing on Earth. very nice.
promises made and kept............. is the sweetest thing on Earth. very nice.
MadameGinga
the brevity is this poem's compliment. A brilliant visual and who wouldn't love a promise kept?
the brevity is this poem's compliment. A brilliant visual and who wouldn't love a promise kept?
dahlusion
such dreamy imagery in all of its vagueness—nice job! The thousand eyelids of dreams can feel like pebbles in our eyes, or mouths with longing, or water that jumps up and turns to tears. bravo!!!!!!! peace and light, dah
such dreamy imagery in all of its vagueness—nice job! The thousand eyelids of dreams can feel like pebbles in our eyes, or mouths with longing, or water that jumps up and turns to tears. bravo!!!!!!! peace and light, dah
Ron Peat
But did you find any old promises made and kept? I want more. Where is this dancing poet now when we need "The rest of the story!" Old news is forgotten, new news hasn't been made yet. And the news of promises made and kept are top secret and they'll never be in the news. A poet friend// RH Peat.
But did you find any old promises made and kept? I want more. Where is this dancing poet now when we need "The rest of the story!" Old news is forgotten, new news hasn't been made yet. And the news of promises made and kept are top secret and they'll never be in the news. A poet friend// RH Peat.
Dr.subhendu kar
The yellow brick road, searching for Promises made and kept..... as when reasoned to reckon with bliss as rain ravishes tinkling from clouds, wonderful write
The yellow brick road, searching for Promises made and kept..... as when reasoned to reckon with bliss as rain ravishes tinkling from clouds, wonderful write
Ben Gieske
Delightful. I hoped you found some.
Delightful. I hoped you found some.
ritty patnaik
lovely poem here.dancing ,bouncing dreams down the brick road.......loved it !
lovely poem here.dancing ,bouncing dreams down the brick road.......loved it !
promises are still on its sway to keep on searching, as light of quest reels through walk over path of gold, most inspiring write by metaphor