#84 Poetry In Motion

The Gift of Love

A day of sunny meadows...

We wandered through

The maze of desire,

Looking for love, and

Found truth.

Written August 5, 2008
10:46 p.m.

Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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lynnbglover
Dorothy, just great, just great.
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Floreann Cawley
A beautiful and wonderful uplifting poem Dorothy..Floreann
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cjkrieger
Let me add my voice to all those who have said how wonderful this is! Bravo!
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robertchoward
You have a great sense of economy and the twists you bring in cast a welcome and unexpected light on the subject of your poems.
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samanyan
a lovely find and beautifully told
 
Anu a
WOW!!!
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aequilla
love with without truth is lust or a lie
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Sylvia Frances Chan
WOW! Sunny meadows....many many flowers in there, grass so green...and...at last truth you found...this must be true love, no doubt! That is indeed the gift of...love...so true...Excellent worded!
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Chris Jibero
We say here that "conscience is an open wound and only can truth heal it."A terse but thought provoking poem you have here.
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Dr.subhendu kar
ooking for love, and Found truth..............cry of joy serenades springing from truth of love and light dissipates truth portraying curves of desire, wonderful wrte
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RAJ NANDY
Keats in his famous poem on the 'Grecian Urn' concludes by saying 'beauty is truth & truth is beauty' ! After reading this poem I would like to say , 'love is truth and truth is love !' - - Raj
 
spbsdude
short, sweet, and profound.
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Simply Bono Razek
So many words can describe this write..but I'll use just two.. ~Extremely Beautiful!~
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Prashant Shaurya
this is an extremely thought provoking write madam.. and i really feel that love is synonymous to truth.. regards prashant
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Romeo Della Valle
Love has found you through vision and wisdom so you can see the difference between right and wrong and also, fake and real. God Bless You! Love and Peace,...
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Ken e Hall
Love found true or false...truth found...luvli...regards
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ritty patnaik
isn't love as glorious as truth !beautiful compressed words which tells a lot......ritty
 
Lillian Susan Thomas
very good poem, from love to truth in 5 lines, quite a leap of faith, but deftly handled by an accomplished aerialist of words.
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NadineM
How glorious it is to find ourselves and the deepest truth in our true love and soulmate. You've described this so well here...Nadine
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