for lost love

Searching ..

Searching i am in the snow
In the silhouette
of every fallen flower's
frozen petal

Searching i am in the sand
of the vast desert
in every watermark left
by the promising mirage

Show me yourself my love
Atleast as the wailing desert's wind
Atleast as a falling midnight star

Published October 29, 2010 Write a comment
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Ben Gieske
I like this image you portray here: In the silhouette of every fallen flower's frozen petal The wailing desert's wind and falling midnight star evoke responses worth waiting for.
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carol
a good feeling of searching i n this poem
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Kesav V Easwaran
Apt use of metaphors...the qualifying expressions add to the feeling of lost love...good write
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