Another look at nature through the eyes of an admirer.
The Music Of The Rain
Puffs of light gray
Loom in the air above
Heavy with their burdens
Unable no more
To support their load
Release comes as refreshing
As their release is to the earth
Release comes gradual
drop by drop
The water falls
Through darkened skies
Each drop
Beating a tune
Upon the earth
The beat of each drop
The rhythm of nature
The slight breeze accompanies
Causing flowers and grass
To dance to the beat
Emitting aromas appealing
To the nose
As well as the mind
The music of the rain
Enchanting all who hear it
Through sight, sound and smell
Each beat part of an incantation
To draw the listener
And render them helpless
Trance like they give attention
To the music of the rain.
Nikunj
nature is a powerful magenet that draws oneself towards it and therein a beauty unfolds that more magical than the magic can ever be ...this poem is soft and imginitive , capturing the mood of the rain and an admiring mind at the same time.
nature is a powerful magenet that draws oneself towards it and therein a beauty unfolds that more magical than the magic can ever be ...this poem is soft and imginitive , capturing the mood of the rain and an admiring mind at the same time.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I love rainy days...I love this descriptive verse of my favorite time to venture out in search of myself... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I love rainy days...I love this descriptive verse of my favorite time to venture out in search of myself... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I love rainy days...I love this descriptive verse of my favorite time to venture out in search of myself... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I love rainy days...I love this descriptive verse of my favorite time to venture out in search of myself... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Paul Chafer
A weather song indeed, well written, love the flirtations with a symphony, very apt. (Once saw a tropical storm, very different to what we have in England.) The kind of thing I enjoy writing myself: nice one.
A weather song indeed, well written, love the flirtations with a symphony, very apt. (Once saw a tropical storm, very different to what we have in England.) The kind of thing I enjoy writing myself: nice one.
Simply Bono Razek
i love a rainy night ' specially upon a tin roof~very romantic noise :) awesome write.
i love a rainy night ' specially upon a tin roof~very romantic noise :) awesome write.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
You have touched my heart...I love rain poems...this is wonderful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Walk and Sing in the rain
You have touched my heart...I love rain poems...this is wonderful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Walk and Sing in the rain
GomerLePoet
I wanted to add even better if you have a copy of the Doors - Riders on the Storm - playing in the background
I wanted to add even better if you have a copy of the Doors - Riders on the Storm - playing in the background
GomerLePoet
what a great picture you paint as always is the case. I love all of these ingrediants, specially the sound and smell as I look out my window writing. Thanks for sharing.
what a great picture you paint as always is the case. I love all of these ingrediants, specially the sound and smell as I look out my window writing. Thanks for sharing.
Ben Gieske
I can appreciate this, not just the rain but each and every drop. Our home had a tile roof and I still remember being in bed and listening to the rain drops dripping down on the tile just outside the window. Very soothing.
I can appreciate this, not just the rain but each and every drop. Our home had a tile roof and I still remember being in bed and listening to the rain drops dripping down on the tile just outside the window. Very soothing.
redbarchettadrive
If some rain would fall, my inspiration might kick in! Awesome title too!
If some rain would fall, my inspiration might kick in! Awesome title too!
nhorlandi
I love the lines of this piece, a wonderful creation and in deep thoughts. I know there's music of the rain when it's not torrential.
I love the lines of this piece, a wonderful creation and in deep thoughts. I know there's music of the rain when it's not torrential.
heterodynemind
Awesome. I can smell it now and sense it's muffled pattering.
Awesome. I can smell it now and sense it's muffled pattering.
JSand
Cheers to east coast music, Carl, and cheers to you Pendemic on another excellently expressed array. -J
Cheers to east coast music, Carl, and cheers to you Pendemic on another excellently expressed array. -J
Ismael Iniguez
awesome poem, i even noticed just by reading the last word of each sentence, it even gets the point across... gray above burdens more load refreshing earth.....etc
awesome poem, i even noticed just by reading the last word of each sentence, it even gets the point across... gray above burdens more load refreshing earth.....etc
DanielK.
Its funny how you wrote this, for it was hard for me to write about this subject. But yea this is really descriptive and enjoyment to read. Great write!
Its funny how you wrote this, for it was hard for me to write about this subject. But yea this is really descriptive and enjoyment to read. Great write!
Nouzad Jaadan
it s romantic and amazing i can see soul of shelly in it .. you have very respect poems .. so go on .. regards
it s romantic and amazing i can see soul of shelly in it .. you have very respect poems .. so go on .. regards
Carl Harris
This is a very expressive and well written poem, Pendemic, one I enjoyed reading from beginning to end. It almost sounds like the rain we've been having lately along the East coast. The rhythm in this fine write almost captures the sound of music. Carl.
This is a very expressive and well written poem, Pendemic, one I enjoyed reading from beginning to end. It almost sounds like the rain we've been having lately along the East coast. The rhythm in this fine write almost captures the sound of music. Carl.
A delight to read... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing