Our grandchildren accept us for ourselves, without rebuke or effort to change us, as no one in our entire lives has ever done, not our parents, siblings, spouses, friends - and hardly ever our own grown children.
-- Ruth Goode

img_5520 by Alison Mary Cassidy

Two Years Old

I open the door
and his face explodes
in a brimming Cheshire cat smile.

'I love you' I proclaim
with a tear in my voice
'Yes' he agrees with a nod.

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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I'll bet his heart is shaped like a valentine with seed pearls and lace spilling over into happiness...your short poem speaks volumes of love. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I'll bet his heart is shaped like a valentine with seed pearls and lace spilling over into happiness...your short poem speaks volumes of love. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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erik99
Curiously moving in its brevity. His matter-of-fact acceptance of a grandmother's love is charming and beautiful.
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Bob Blackwell
Lovely looking boy, is this the new Dylan Thomas?
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Ken e Hall
Cute as a pure smile...grandkids the family circle...God always gives man another chance with a gift of a child..regards
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Munia Khan
I think this is the shortest poem I have ever read in your page and indeed it fits the lil one so well..2 wonderful stanzas for a cutie of 2 summers...Such a cute little fellow !!! And I am in love with his cat smile :-) So sweet and so full of love this wonderful poem Allie.Beautiful and adorable work.
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
A child is a cherub...lovely write allie...
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Susan Jarvis
Pure, heartfelt, unconditional love in a tide of poetic pride that floods the page with sheer joy. To know that one is loved is the best feeling in the world, and Dylan's face says it all - he is gorgeous, just like his grandmother! :)
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eleanor prince
I love the simple warm brevity. Couldn't be said better. Celebrates the open-heartedness of a child for a loved grandparent
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Shashendra Amalshan
Allie, after a long time that I read one of your works and must say that this is one of the sweetest and cutest poems you have composed so far, ohhhh, how he reciprocate your love, lol, very sweet!!..(hope you are doing ok, I haven't been to PF much in last couple of weeks, hope you are doing ok, Allie)
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Don
I have grandchildren as well. "Yes" in agreement of our love is enough, isn't it! Yes we do love our little ones! Wonderful snapshot.
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Karin Anderson
This is simply enchanting Alison and I can see "you" in Dylan's photo and Ruth Goode's quote is so apt. The camera has caught is gorgeous spirit and I can see now why you adore him so much. He looks ready for a beautiful hug! Thank you for sharing him with us!
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Fay Slimm
How thankful I am to see images back again Allie - this one is so special - - his dear little face is a poem itself. The minimal phrasing wrapping the core of this narrative around love is so very apt. Delighting, one in the other with no trace of any generation gap is the written eptimome here of ageless affection. A powerful and poetic combination.
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Leslie Alexis
there cannot be anything more beautiful
 
humanwoman
God bless him and you
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Prashant Shaurya
ohh.. i forgot to mention.. he is so damn cute.. lots of love and blessings for the little one madam...
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Prashant Shaurya
'I love you' I proclaim with a tear in my voice 'Yes' he agrees with a nod. these lines have a lot within them.. especially the last line is overflowing with the ecstasy that his nod imparts on you.. it moistened my eyes in reminiscence... my grannie too is the most precious gift of God to me.. regards prashant
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nimal dunuhinga
Really beautiful and cute! Alison I hear that teary voice And the precious smile Mountains even nod!
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oldchampagnelady
Tugs the heart in a wonderful way
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Ernestine Northover
There are wonderful memories to be had with kids so young and fresh and loving. Lovely piece, says so much.
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Sandra Martyres
Such a touching piece Allie...a very proud grandmom and an everloving and trusting grandson...Beautiful write
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Simply Bono Razek
wow this won over my heart! You just wanna hug 'em & never let go~BEAUTIFUL !!
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sathyanarayana
.tear in voice........so good to read....the man in making
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carol
his face explodes wonderful
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emilou g:)emotions in words
Just a smile from the little ones makes d difference. They are truly angels and the real face of love. Thanks for sharing about your little one Alie...........SMILE! THE DAY IS A NEW GIFT! :)emilou g.
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Frederick Kesner
Aye, the smile, the nod, says it all - a complete poem in itself. My little one just turned three.... the pure and innocent joy still lives. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
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