Fire & Smoke
Fireless smoke.
You breathe it in.
Foreign substances linger,
Take control of
Your body
Your mind
Your heart.
Smokeless fire.
I am breathless.
Foreign feelings linger,
Take control of
My body
My mind
My heart.
Susan Jarvis
Love is the most potent drug of all and the powerful expression of your feelings in the second stanza enforce this. A superb write. :)
Love is the most potent drug of all and the powerful expression of your feelings in the second stanza enforce this. A superb write. :)
Pendemic
How true the effect of drugs touches the none users also. Great write.
How true the effect of drugs touches the none users also. Great write.
I am left in admiration of the way you have expressed the two states so perfectly in two mirror-image stanzas.