Doberman in a Rolls Royce
While,
a handsome
doberman
dressed in
a luxury
tuxedo got
off from
a lavish
Rolls Royce
swished
and whistled
past me,
and did
a mushy
play with
a drama-queen,
moving
to the Kyle's
hip-hop style,
by the river
of Nile..
Then a Dalmatian
in dark
goggles
riding
an exotic
Jaguar
almost killed
me with his
tremendously
Outrageous
sporty
moves,
and left
me with
despondent
grooves,
Whilst
I watched
In total envy,
mind blurred
with gravy,
weighing so
heavy,
as a cuddly
Chihuahua
wrapped in
Rosy feathers
Got out From
A Mercedes Benz
And rushed
To Pose for
the vanity Fair,
and then
went out
on a sexy
date with
Hilton sisters,…
As I
dreamt
and stood
in dismay,
envying their
luxury ways
flabbergasted
and stunned
when he
came…
Like a panther
he gazed,
like a spider
he weaved
and caught
me off-guard,
strangled me
and took me
to the
hangman’s bay.
pic from -- http://www.flickr.com/photos/philuknet/82935515/
shashendra amalshan Copyright 2010
you have the wit of a comedian, talent of a writer, combine them together and you are fantastic poet.
You have excellently contrasted the two situations -the class struggle and the ever winning dominant class- and opened our eyes to the unfair reality in which the winners are alienated, to get blind in their own fantasies
I loved these dancing emotions swaying with the rythms, rhymes. and sounds. I must confess, I found it amusing to picture and had some internal laughs. The ending is superb.
Hi Shan love your doggy funny tale with rolls to jags and mercedes so cleverly happy envying their luxury ways those four legged rich muts=====like your new photo you look like a pop star, can you sing? anyway you are a star on PF regards
A rappers' and a dog-lovers' delight! I wonder what you'd have done with my elegant, though vertically challenged dachshund, Ella? Perhaps she could alight with a flea in her ear from a purple vintage goggomobile - or was that a doggamobile? Another side-splitting read! Love it! Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Shan, your unique style, wit and way with words never fails to make me hold my breath in anticipation and then smile from ear to ear...and I just adore your 'Chihuahua wrapped in Rosy feathers' - pure poetic joy!! :)
Such show and tell wisdom woven through your ingenuously created words and your imagination as always makes me smile. The trouble is now you are strangled and hung, how could we ever do without you here with us freaks. It's all right, I will find a magician to bring you back to life, if you promise not to die again!!!
i liked your poetic symbols there...luxury pets, yes; who? well, you tell a hard truth in a most humorous way...tfs
Well, well, well, Shan !!! Nice to meet the doberman here :-) and it was really great to see you are taken to the hangman's bay lolol :-)This is another rare kind of an interesting creative piece from the sharpest nib inside Shan's brain :-)Love this.
Amazing write... great pace and flow
Tongue in cheek this one Shan, once again your imagination is good
Dark humour but brillinatly delivered....great poem Shan!!
wowwww!!!!you outdo yourself with this one Shan...Oh!Damn!why cant I write something like this :))Kudos :))
Very insightful write Shan - - and a rant against what money can buy is needed with so much wastefully spread around the globe. Good illustrations too.
Wow, this one really got to me! How well you have set the scene and viscerally presented the truth. Excellently done.