Our Great Escape
As clouds make love
to the unassuming skies
come
bring your body next to mine
we'll be fighting
on the battlefield of love
for time is placing to our private get away
while seconds turn selective minutes
burning hours into play.
As chances of choice whipers their goodbyes
you'll be floating on stage with me
before the hurricane comes to stop us
spin me like a satellite dish
as I look upon a star and wish.
Even if the sky is falling down
squeeze me tight
my climax has begun
cause we know tonight
is the night to let go
leaving all behind.
Come on
fly with me
as we make our great escape
ignoring broken spirits that sighs
through the days and nights
with rain pouring down
my heart no longer aches.
Written by :- Giselle Joseph
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
very well penned!
very well penned!
Carl Harris
This is a wonderfully expressive poem, Giselle, and a very sensual one as well. Your phrasing in this appealing write is outstanding, and the imagery your words evoked was romantic and beautiful as could be! Carl.
This is a wonderfully expressive poem, Giselle, and a very sensual one as well. Your phrasing in this appealing write is outstanding, and the imagery your words evoked was romantic and beautiful as could be! Carl.
Desiree
"ignoring broken spirits that sighs thorugh the days and nights with rain pouring down my heart no longer aches.. " . I like this part, great piece u have giselle, thanks for sharing.
"ignoring broken spirits that sighs thorugh the days and nights with rain pouring down my heart no longer aches.. " . I like this part, great piece u have giselle, thanks for sharing.
When I read this poem, I believe again that love can conquer all. Beautifully written.