The Edge of Sanity
Cracked wits
Sentiments leaking
Dripping to the floor
Hollowed out mind
Gray and void
Holds memory no more
Character retracted
Personality hides
Fearful behind black shroud
Shadow shivering
Nervous wreck
The aim is to becloud
Soul withdrawn
Vacant eyes
Stare through eternity
Tempt fate
gamble life
This could be you or me
hydromedusa
Superb word choice, flawlessly written.
Superb word choice, flawlessly written.
Raj Arumugam
true and so well expressed...
true and so well expressed...
isitso963
beautiful. i couldnt have said better myself :)
beautiful. i couldnt have said better myself :)
knight4696
Deep and Dark - but oh so true ... this could be you or me. Nice Job ... I'm a fan of the dark stuff! :) Ken
Deep and Dark - but oh so true ... this could be you or me. Nice Job ... I'm a fan of the dark stuff! :) Ken
Lunar
I love this Pen, awsome write!! :o)
I love this Pen, awsome write!! :o)
Raj Arumugam
Insightful and the poem comes with a dramatic and frank ending: This could be you or me
Insightful and the poem comes with a dramatic and frank ending: This could be you or me
Ismael Iniguez
as soon as we hit that point, we'll never be the same, actually how you put it..10
as soon as we hit that point, we'll never be the same, actually how you put it..10
JSand
Another good write. I've believed myself to be right on the thin line that separates the insane from the others. -J
Another good write. I've believed myself to be right on the thin line that separates the insane from the others. -J
Ablethroughwords
Wow! very deep and oh so true!!!
Wow! very deep and oh so true!!!
I have wandered these dark halls at times, they drip despair in stinking viscuous runnels of broken dreams and apathy. this is really well written - powerful phrasing :)