My first attempt in writing a TANKA, please spare me the rod friends! and correct me my wrongs.
My love
You were with me yesterday
And today you are gone, far away
Where are you gone my love?
Leaving me alone in this big wide world
Your children and me left all alone
Robert Ross
despair is a harsh master.
despair is a harsh master.
Ezna Stephna
Oh my dear poet this is a very emotional poem you penned with sadness in your lines.in fact its a great depth of pain and sorrow you sharing with me. God will bless you and give you strength!..... dont lose hope. it touch my heart and bring tears
Oh my dear poet this is a very emotional poem you penned with sadness in your lines.in fact its a great depth of pain and sorrow you sharing with me. God will bless you and give you strength!..... dont lose hope. it touch my heart and bring tears
A tanka full of heartfelt emotion - a grand first attempt. :)