This is my near death experience

N.D.E.

How would you like to die

but never get to leave?

To wander in between

the above and the beneath

To be, but not to bet

that is what you are

Hanging around in limbo

still alive but not aware

Still able to see and hear

but not process a thing

No body to keep you in

you cannot be contained

No substance to move you

from plane to plane

I have been there before

once upon a time

Remembering every moment

so real and sublime

There really are no words

to paint a perfect picture

and that no eyesight

could ever capture

It's unimaginable enrapture

Published October 16, 2009 Write a comment
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heterodynemind
You should try to capture it with words, just for an exercise in creativity (smile) {and then let me read it!}
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Nouzad Jaadan
thank s it s goof and with sadness
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Pendemic
A well expressed vivid account of the lingering between. Good write.
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marvinbrato
Wow, very profound experienced well expressed. Thanks for sharing.
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