Season Change
summer starts to cry
sunshine fades winds blow cooler
autumn trees weep leaves
(Mistycalpoet Sept/2010)
Ben Gieske
I like the picture. Very nicely written. I like the connection between cry and weep.
I like the picture. Very nicely written. I like the connection between cry and weep.
Sandra Martyres
The changing season is well well captured in thsi neat haiku
The changing season is well well captured in thsi neat haiku
sridevi
gorgeous ...touching imagery Misty :))
gorgeous ...touching imagery Misty :))
john o'connell
the change well captured! tfs.. john
the change well captured! tfs.. john
Nikunj
a season change captured beautifully in words ...
a season change captured beautifully in words ...
Glorious... as is the picture... wonderful imagery, well presented