Seeking Love.....
A day’s smile lifts me up
like a wind’s whiff picks
a drop from the ocean’s heart.
I look back on the past as
I soar. The blue water’s eyes
are as bright as my path is.
This moment hinged on
the present, ceases to be
a means. The ends don't matter.
I leave the fears behind;
lock the doors on the desires’
den. An enlightened journey begins…
emilou g:)emotions in words
Beautiful! yes, leave your fears behind... let that courage shine in your journey to a new life. ........SMILE! THE DAY IS A NEW GIFT! :)emilou g.
Beautiful! yes, leave your fears behind... let that courage shine in your journey to a new life. ........SMILE! THE DAY IS A NEW GIFT! :)emilou g.
yelena
'I leave the fears behind; lock the doors on the desires’ den. An enlightened journey begins…' These last lines are I think the key to the poem as a whole. Makes me think of Dante's journey of spirit and soul's purification. Thanks for sharing, Nikunj.
'I leave the fears behind; lock the doors on the desires’ den. An enlightened journey begins…' These last lines are I think the key to the poem as a whole. Makes me think of Dante's journey of spirit and soul's purification. Thanks for sharing, Nikunj.
mistycalpoet
May the journey never ends Niks... Fantabulous write!
May the journey never ends Niks... Fantabulous write!
sridevi
mmm...maybe I agree with Liliana out here:))Thums up !!!
mmm...maybe I agree with Liliana out here:))Thums up !!!
Marilese
Living in the moment, fully aware of its wonder and beauty and possibility and elating in being a living being, yes, I agree with you, I want to sink my soul into every aspect of every moment and be fully part of it and enjoy all its sublime mystery...
Living in the moment, fully aware of its wonder and beauty and possibility and elating in being a living being, yes, I agree with you, I want to sink my soul into every aspect of every moment and be fully part of it and enjoy all its sublime mystery...
Liliana Negoi
i believe the ends do matter. because the end of one thing is the beginning of another. and it's ok to feel a bit of fear in front of the unknown. but the willingness of taking the first step on that journey is the most important of all :) good luck nik
i believe the ends do matter. because the end of one thing is the beginning of another. and it's ok to feel a bit of fear in front of the unknown. but the willingness of taking the first step on that journey is the most important of all :) good luck nik
Ivan Donn Carswell
pure poetry, fabulous journey...
pure poetry, fabulous journey...
Ezna Stephna
An enlightened journey begins…Great journey in seeking for love,dont forget rose and choc for a gift and fragrance of jasmine over your T Shirt with sweet blowing smile of yours ... Congratulation seeking of your love ... very romantic poem that remind me my gift ...lol you peened it so unique style i really liked ..... intelligent poet
An enlightened journey begins…Great journey in seeking for love,dont forget rose and choc for a gift and fragrance of jasmine over your T Shirt with sweet blowing smile of yours ... Congratulation seeking of your love ... very romantic poem that remind me my gift ...lol you peened it so unique style i really liked ..... intelligent poet
Gita Ashok
"This moment hinged on the present, ceases to be a means. The ends don't matter.'" Very impressive lines. I liked your closing lines, too. This is a sublime verse!
"This moment hinged on the present, ceases to be a means. The ends don't matter.'" Very impressive lines. I liked your closing lines, too. This is a sublime verse!
Fay Slimm
This is a statement of honesty and intent. It reveals a searching which once begun can be as absorbing as the imagery in this wondrous piece - - may the journey towards Love never end Niks.
This is a statement of honesty and intent. It reveals a searching which once begun can be as absorbing as the imagery in this wondrous piece - - may the journey towards Love never end Niks.
My favorite lines :A day’s smile lifts me up like a wind’s whiff picks a drop from the ocean’s heart.