On a trip to the beach I saw this scene....
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Solitary Sentinel
Clouds hurrying past
He waits like a sentinel
For his master’s boat
Paul Chafer
hah! As a dog owner, really like this one. Good write
hah! As a dog owner, really like this one. Good write
john o'connell
maybe we are all dogsbodies waiting for Our Master's boat?
maybe we are all dogsbodies waiting for Our Master's boat?
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Scene devine...love sublime! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Scene devine...love sublime! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
short and simple but i think it's good... mostly when I see the JPG you displayed like an introduction... nice write
short and simple but i think it's good... mostly when I see the JPG you displayed like an introduction... nice write
Susan Jarvis
Such loyalty with the backdrop of beauty - just lovely. :)
Such loyalty with the backdrop of beauty - just lovely. :)
nimal dunuhinga
This obedient servant of the Master's name is Dog! Nicely painted with the silhouette landscape, robyn you're a tactile painter with the brush instead of words!
This obedient servant of the Master's name is Dog! Nicely painted with the silhouette landscape, robyn you're a tactile painter with the brush instead of words!
j_kool
This is so beautiful. Lessons of faith we could learn by simply watching a dog and his master.
This is so beautiful. Lessons of faith we could learn by simply watching a dog and his master.
Mark L. Berryann
A dog's faith should teach man a thing or two about faith! Great little message!
A dog's faith should teach man a thing or two about faith! Great little message!
yelena
Such a vivid picture in my mind..Great senryu, thanks :)
Such a vivid picture in my mind..Great senryu, thanks :)
Kesav V Easwaran
expressive piece...words complment the image very well...liked
expressive piece...words complment the image very well...liked
Sandra Martyres
Such a brilliant and beautiful senryu poem Robyn ...a very stong show of loyalty in just three lines
Such a brilliant and beautiful senryu poem Robyn ...a very stong show of loyalty in just three lines
Karin Anderson
How cute is this! A little head poking out of the grand sweep of sky making such a statement! Wonderful Senryu Robyn!
How cute is this! A little head poking out of the grand sweep of sky making such a statement! Wonderful Senryu Robyn!
Rahul Aithal
Nice one.
Nice one.
Sana Rose
What a gorgeous picture from your cam, robyn! The clouds are so distinct! And the poem describes it... And like a sentinel - great metaphor... Fine write, robyn! It's amazing how deep just 3 lines can go!
What a gorgeous picture from your cam, robyn! The clouds are so distinct! And the poem describes it... And like a sentinel - great metaphor... Fine write, robyn! It's amazing how deep just 3 lines can go!
dog is teacher.......